its so ... what's the word?

um... sneaky!

that's it...

hehehe

It was adorable it was also cute how you used japanese as an additional launguage. i love it when people do that it makes it easier for me to read english stories/fan fictions

love the ending

~kaori

P.S

Your name is kaga right?

well not to be rude or anything but in japan we dont call outselves "-chan". we leave it to others to determain the aquantenses worth.

Ohiyo-ohayoo(gozaimasu) onegai (kudasai) iie arigatoo; doomo arigatoo; doomo arigatoo gozaimasu

Ja mata Yameru (yamemasu) (don't know that one)

kaa san-okaasan otoosan

Well story was interesting, of course it could be better; no worry you'll improve just don't stop writing n_n

For future a little Japanese lesson:

Ohiyo-ohayoo(gozaimasu)

honegai-onegai (kudasai)

Iyo-iie

arigato-arigatoo; doomo arigatoo; doomo arigatoo gozaimasu

Ja ne-Ja mata

Yemede-Yameru (yamemasu)

kaa san-okaasan

tou san-otoosan