interesting, i can't wait for more thanks for updating and making the chapter long i appreciate it. please update and good luck until chapter 30.

ps: please don't take so long in updating this story thank you.

interesting, i can't wait for more thanks for updating and making the chapter long i appreciate it. please update and good luck until chapter 29.

ps: please don't take so long in updating this story thank you.

Oh good Gwyn... the feels... Don't despair Al, you'll find her again!

It's a good story. I really like the story.

Starting to get interesting.

Well... More interesting than before. XD

Keep up the good work, because I shall wait eagerly for the next chapter.

interesting, i can't wait for more thanks for updating and making the chapter long i appreciate it. please update and good luck until chapter 28.

interesting, i can't wait for more thanks for updating and making the chapter long i appreciate it. please update and good luck until chapter 27.

interesting, i can't wait for more thanks for updating and making the chapter long i appreciate it. please update and good luck until chapter 26.

ps: please keep on updating differences made, will chapter 26 be coming out in may something?, i hope so. what's happeing with catherine?. please don't take so long in updating this story thanks.

Overall I think the first chapter is very good. And I don't think you'd want to take my words for things. I have trouble producing good stories, so I can't produce stories that are in good depth, can't become an actual writer, and that's why I put my heart in . So, yours is good, better than mine, and I'd like to know who the character in your profile is. She's really cute.

This story is so EPIC.. I cried at the Nina chapter... and can't wait for some Al/Catherine. Love this M.T Mystery Twins

You know, out of how many times she pounded vigorously on the door that it would bust open? Must be a pathetic weakling if I must say so myself.

Hmm, she's like me before this website. Well, I wouldn't draw a transmutation in my basement - because I don't have one - but I'd do some on my legs, arms, forehead, chest area, neck, and everywhere! Guess what?
Al: What?
Me: *Shakes head* It didn't work.
Al: Awe...
Me: Even with blood it didn't work.

Lol, Truth's bipolar now! Ha! I know he's really not, I know exactly what's going through his head. Don't ask, I just know these things.

Then with the spooky dream, I've might've read it wrong, but it reminded me of the nightmares I had with Truth. *Shivers*

Why haven't I found this before? . Love it!

I like the plot itself, but the sentence structure is wierd and makes it hard to read. You switch verb tense a lot and use words in wrong places.

interesting, thanks for updating and making the chapter long i appreciate it. please update and good luck until chapter 25.

ps: i hope chapter 25 will come out in december or january something.

interesting, i can't wait for more thanks for updating and making the chapter long i appreciate it. please update and good luck until chapter 23.

ps: please keep on updating differences made, will chapter 23 be coming out in september twenty something or in the beginning of october?, i hope so.