Very good, I love it.

Beautifully written.

Cute, very cute.

This is awesome and normally I don't ship MJ and Peter but this is really sweet :)

lovely!

nice

Well-written, sweet (but not sickeningly so) and well... /nice/, overall. Thanks for the read. :)

Musafreen

cute!

That was awesome! I always wondered what would happen with the people on the train.

i never thought to think bout the repercussions on how people would look at peter after he was an jerk at the restaurant. ever good point of view. thank you.

i read that you're a huge spidey fan. just wondering if you've ever read this story.

Just a Face On a Train [2093771] by katheryne

if not, i think you'd enjoy it.

I love this fic, just like the one you based it on. It's always good to see that Pete's getting something back and that people realise his circumstances...

What a fun short on Peter and MJ! I love stories that are told from an outsider's perspective... especially when passengers from the train scene are involved! I was hoping one of the passengers who saw him without his mask would show up in the third movie, but I'll take what I can get in fanfiction. :)

I think it's great that Lily had so many confusing takes on who Peter really is. Geek... superhero... horrible boyfriend... sweet boyfriend?

Wonderful story, it works well with all of the movies. I like the character of Lily. Shes not a Mary Jane youve created, but a real person who is living her own life that overlaps with Peter's and Mary Janes two times. Very good job, please keep up the good work. And I agree with you, Strangers on A Train is a must read in SpiderMan fan fiction

Nice story :-)

nice...

a great little snippet into the futere of a girl who knew...

and of mary Jane and Peter