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That was absolutely stunning and perfect in every way possible! The writing was gorgeous and descriptive. I was swept away. I never read fanfics from beginning to end but you captivated me. They were written so well! Very in character and so good and easy to imagine. You have given me hope in fanfic again!

That was good. I loved how true to the characters it was.

I'm so thankful I'd read this story. Damn I'm currently washed away from the feels. I was so touched my manliness slipped away as the onion ninja struck me with full force. I loved the build-up and how the story played out. There was no rush to the main point and even how the event was played, it was the thing I'm looking for on a lemon: innocence and consensual love-making. You pulled it off magnificently, you didn't stray away with their personalities. Seriously, I wish this have more favorites because it's one of the best story out there, and I'm not exaggerating. Thank you for making a lemon like this. You also inspired me in some way.

These are two of my favorite characters ( I just started watching anime ). I couldn't imagine anything more sweeter than this. It was worth reading. You're really good at it. Please don't ever stop writing.
Love, your new fan :)

Nice!

I Love it!

Props to you for keeping them in character.

Thank you for such a wonderful piece, too bad this fandom hasn't that much reader. You write superbly. This isn't lewd, is done tastefully. I wish more would read this story. Kudos!

You've got it down to a science! I would've lijed to have seen the two confess their love...but then that's the beauty of souske and chidori. They're adorable.

I love this fic, i read it over and over!

Perfect. Simply, perfect. You have a beautiful talent for writing and you truly captured the characters of Sousuke and Kaname down to a T. It didn't feel out of character on either end and while I was reading it, I could actually imagine the apprehension and fear and anxiety and attraction between the characters as the story progressed. I loved this dearly, and I think I'm going to reread it! I know this story is years old but you should DEFINATELY write some more fics about these lovely characters!

This was really nice, I liked it! :)

whooo.. great great tension! i was totally holding my breath till the finale.. :D just one advice from me: you may want to have longer paragraphs. it will give the impression that the story flows smoothly instead of being chopped up into tiny bits. it's just my opinion anyway. feel free to ignore.

PS: i wish there were more foreplay..but with all the tension going on, who cares..lol

This was my second time through reading this story, I LOVED IT! I know i'm tardy to the party but i just HAD to leave a review anyway :)

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(aka: ME GUSTA)