i loved this fic from the start... Everything was amazing . You did a fabulous job.

The grammar, spelling, and use of details is excellent. I wanted to smack both Kim and Tommy for being ridiculous and refusing to realize they love each other.

Tommy's letter to Kim was soo sweet and cute. That's enough to keep me reading

I just re-read the whole story and I really loved it. I hope you consider writing more TK story in the future :)

Great work.

Great work. Tommy should have beaten the crap out of Duncan. Sorry it took me so long to finished reading your story, since I was with out internet for a while.

that was an amazing story! i never would have thought about that as a reason for the letter. major points for you!

Nice. I liked the story. Not what happened to Kim, but the rest was pretty cool. I would have liked to have seen more closure for Kim than just the verdict. Sometimes that's only the start and seeing how things are going for her a few months after that would have been nice.

Not bad. A few things though. You need to give credit in each and every chapter for the songs that you are using. Thus, you need to give the title and the singer/songwriter/ artist responsible for it even if it's just in an author's note. Not everyone is familiar with the artist you keep naming, so this lets people know who it is and what the song title is.

Also, if Kim was in a medically induced coma, the breathing tube wouldn't be in her nose. She'd be intubated through the mouth, or in the case of a trachea obstruction, she'd have a hole in her throat and the intubation tube passed through that. Either way, she'd be on a ventilator and in ICU, not a normal room. It's a small thing, but having it happen to a few family members now and knowing that the info is available if you look it up on the internet, that kind of stuff makes me cringe. And if the doctor was treating Kim, he'd be sending a nurse out to give them information, not the doctor himself coming out to do it.

I'm glad that Kim is safe now. I still want Duncan and Kim's mom to pay for their crimes.

Thank you so much for continuing this story. It's funny because I just reread this story a couple of days ago. It's a shame that Kim had to go through all of that, even after everything else she's been through. Tommy's sure going to feel guilty for not being there sooner. I wonder what Kim's mom is going to think once she finds out what happened, if she finds out what happened. She is partially to blame for this. I hate to see this one end, but it was great while it lasted.

Thanks for posting this chapter! Please update soon the rest! )

great story...update real soon please

Great work. Please, PLEASE update soon, am on my hand and knee begging you.

Great work.