Still a sad storyline, but it seems to be finding some sort of resort..

VERY cute how she has his dog tags )

xoxo

Oh, this is a great story. You had me on the edge of my seat the entire time. I really hope John finds her!

Booya! That's the kizzle dizzle! Thank you. I like action, no love action.

That was so good! Now we just need part three where John rescues her [:

Wow what an amazing idea! That is so clever how Elizabeth sees things in her mind...aw and her connection to John :) When he hears her...Awesome story!

I really like this one. I like the way it explains what might be happening inside Elizabeth's head. Things like this bring so much more clarity to the oddness that is happening to her.

I love it! Oh my god! It's awesome!

Excellent! Well written and a fabulous idea. I hope you continue this in future YoTS posts!

This is such an amazing and intriguing idea-I love how her subconscious forms different "places" for her to hide in, and that the "laptop" represents all her knowledge of Atlantis. That is SO COOL! And what you added at the end, about the replicators controlling her body-it could go along w/ BAMSR b/c the her in that ship could just be robot her while the real her is trapped somewhere in her head. I dunno, it could work-I'm thinking of using that idea in a fic. But anyway, great job, I LOVE IT. You must continue this next round! I want John to find her!

Luv,

Miss Pookamonga ;-P

huh very interesting! i liked it :) nice touch with the dogatgs

That was very well written and I defintely want to see the next one-shot. Though I suppose I'll have to wait 2 weeks for that!

This is great! I loved the way her subconscious translated the whole situation to her; running through Atlantis with her laptop; absolutely perfect. The shelter of John's rooms was also brilliantly done.

An intriguing concept, which has worked really well! Great one-shot!

Wow! This is just incredible. I'm on the edge of my seat and I can't wait for the next time you post *grin*.