That was perfect. Hidan's just so pitiful here, and that he needs to believe he's doing good in the world~ his devotion is utterly heart-wrenching even though Temari's death is macabre.

This hurt my soul far more than I expected it to. ._. It isn't even because Temari died, because she was so strong but it was just... Hidan.

Very nicely written.

wow that was amazing!

this was good

I've Read this fic long Time ago and I cant stop to do this again and again because I like it so much!

One of the best HidaTema Fangic I've Ever Read!

Now that is something worth reading. If it were to continue, I would totally read it. I kind of want to know what Shikamaru would do if he found out lol.

Awesome story and excellent writing! I love how you made everything so detailed and within the characters' behavior - nothing was OOC. It was a bit depressing, but still very good! I enjoyed it _

Wow. This is very very creepy, but astonishingly beautiful all the same.

One thing I noticed. You wrote: " Temari wishes that he had the energy to spit in his face."

I think you meant 'Temari wishes that "SHE" had the energy to spit in his face.'?

I really like it. It's strange and haunting and yet, incredibly alluring. The emotions you describe and the words you use are just perfect. The ending too is magnificent.

~Jenni~

I will admit that it was well-written and perhaps creative. Unique? Definitely. Cliche? No way. And also, disturbing and twisted are two other adjectives that can describe it. Yes. Quite disturbing.

Hidan is so disturbed. Temari is great. HidanTema is hot.

I like it.

Nice! Very intense, it really made me think. Fluent and descriptive, overall, a great job!

Wow, that was pretty intense. Great job!

Beautifully written and wonderful characterizations. I thought this flowed brilliantly-I love your writing style! ] Great job!

hum... interesting... a lot

good writing