You are simply amazing at writing romance!

I love how you said 'nothing can induce fear like the divine father...' it's really funny, I always felt sorry for him having divine in-laws.

I love the last bit on terror!

Intersting and different... Don't know what else to say.

AWESOME!

The title was perfect for this story, you showed so clearly how their relationship evolved through four books.

See, I had to write the above for a sensible review, when all I really want to say is: -swoons-

hey-these are brilliant! like, really really good :) i love little drabbles (is that what you call these?) like these, they are short and sweet...and very effective. i think my favourite has to be the very first one, 'friendship' because i just read it like 4 or 5 times and it just sounded so...real! and the terror one from ROTG. i can imagine that any soon-to-be-father-in-law would be terrifying, but to have a god as well-! :P well done, really really good.

This is so sweet I love it so going on my Favorite list! Write more like this on dif pairs please maybe a kel/dom or a alanna/george

Amazing. It captures them him so perfectly in each book, from when he admires and cares for her as a friend, to when they finally realize they're in love. Please, keep writing! D

Really lovely. I think the reason I've always loved the Immortal's series is because of how the relationship develops so well, because it takes four books for them to even "really" realize it. Love how you mapped it out, and showed how that course developes through the five themes _

This is very clever! I love the idea of charting thier relationship through drabbles! Those little snapshots... they remind me of Anoriel's Vulnerability, one of the greatest fics at the moment. I really do love the idea of drabble fics...

Anyways, great job once more! Keep up the good work!

~Shazzam~