Reviews for Merits
Pemdas42 chapter 55 . 2/27
Okay! Awesome story! Please give us the epilogue? I NEED to know what happened to Zuko and Katara! So many unanswered questions!
Pemdas42 chapter 45 . 2/26
I'm confused about the Iroh situation. Just a couple chapters ago, you insinuated that he was dead. Or, at least, your word choice made it seem that way. I think Zuko said something like "long after he'd gone" when talking about Iroh and, to me, it sounds like you're saying he died
Lennox13 chapter 3 . 1/10
Oh, wow, probably giving away my age, but... Do guys really do that? Expect you to give up your work and sacrifice your time, just so they don't feel offended? I mean, nothing against Jet, but shouldn't he respect Katara enough to believe her? Do people really just start relationships built on no established trust? If I told any of my friends that I had to go because of study or test or just because I'm tired, they'd make sure to get me home ASAP. Oh well, I'm intrigued either way. And your writing is good.
Kslamm chapter 55 . 10/29/2019
You’re trucking along to the finish and I love you for it! I’m gonna be sad if after all these years, they’re dead but I trust your storytelling and am excited for what you have in store. I love this version of them (even though I wish they were just happily together) because they’re funny and real. I’d love to read more stories of this version of Zuko & Katara.
Asters chapter 55 . 10/22/2019
damn
patrokhlus chapter 26 . 9/11/2019
yesss i’m all for werewolf!jet, i think it really fits his character and in a way the freedom fighters could be considered his “pack.” i didn’t see the werewolf twist coming at all and it makes me even more excited to read the next chapters!
KittyKat2583 chapter 54 . 3/12/2019
Hey, hope you’re doing well. I just reread the story again because I missed it so much This story is still such a favorite even years after its last update. Thanks for being such an incredible writer, and have a nice day!
sparrow-keet chapter 54 . 11/1/2018
please do go on
Guest chapter 54 . 6/5/2017
Plzzzz finish this just reading it for the first time in 2017 and it's fantastic!
Yazzysnazzy chapter 54 . 1/26/2017
Although it's been over a year, since this story was last touched, it would be beyond amazing if this story was finished! I love your unique au and I'm keeping my fingers crossed for this story to be finished
EternityRoze262 chapter 54 . 12/6/2016
Hey there! I'll leave you a proper review once I can collect all my thoughts, but I just wanted to quickly tell you that you should definitely finished this story please! You mentioned that you only have a few chapters left and it's been over a year already haha. This has been an incredible ride though so I'd love to see it finished one day!

~Roze
Nymphoftheglade chapter 54 . 10/9/2016
OoO. I can't wait!
queenpri chapter 54 . 5/1/2016
AHHH! This story has been on my sights for a long time! I've been reading ATLA fanfiction on and off for about a year and I'm so happy to have read this! It's a unique take on the entire story and I'm happy it didn't turn into some contrived Twilightesque plot. You write so well and I hope you update soon! I want to see it completed!
Guest chapter 54 . 1/12/2016
I love the twisted version of the modern world you've created and the way you've written the characters as recognisably the same character arcs and generally keeping them in character while rewriting their histories. I also love that you allowed them to keep their bending incorporating it as a mystical element instead of commonplace as it is Avatar. Hopefully, this makes sense you you. I've really enjoyed this story so far can't wait to read the end!
Guest chapter 54 . 1/3/2016
next update?! Love your story.
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