Since Naruto didn't pass the Academy's Graduation Exam he can't be marked as a missing nin. For pairing I say Kin or Tayuya since hes learning from Orochimaru

Huh.. pretty good.

I can't seem to wait anymore! I love the story!

contuire

Very well written, I loved how you got straight into the story instead of using some weak cliche introdcution that most Naruto stories tend to use. You managed, in less than half a page, to get me as interested in this story as I get in other fics about halfway though the entire story.

At first I was annoyed at the inclusion of Orochimaru as he is so often written badly but you introduced him well and his thoughts during the small fight were very in character.

Great story so far, I hope you get a chance to continue it at some point.

AH PLZ UPDATE FAST ITS REALY GOOD OMG IT SO COOL NARUTO OROCHIMARU COMBO KONAHAS DOMED (YEAH I SPELLED IT WRONG DIDNT I)

cool fic so far, is naruto gunna be orochimaru's weapon, i hope not. that bastard should be skinned and turned into a snake skin coat, hehe lol. update soon.

JAN E

Dibble

I think your story is quite different than some of the usual ones out there! Are you going to update before the end of the year?

Graet! Please Update this!

NICE!

m nice plot but naruto has a bloodline? wonder what it is eh, i am surprised to see A-Rank Jutsu Rasengan was listed in the Forbidden Scroll but ah well this is an AU, it will be fun to see if Naruto Turn On Orochimaru and kills him or not during the Invasion at Chunnin Exam.

i cant wait for the update. it doesnt matter when it comes though, for QUALITY is worth more then QUANTITY.

the rasengan is a jutsu passed down by word of mouth. it aint written down

nice beggining to your fic... I like you lenght but it has been a few months since your last update, hope you can add another chapter soon.

cya

Wow, really love it! it is fantastic!