Animagi? I can't remember any mentioning about it before?

I can't help but agree about Ronts...She's seriously incompetent.

I was really starting to enjoy the fic, but your little author's notes in brackets really put me off.

. Is Sirius really under that love potion? Ooo, you sly little...

I don't think his out burst was OOC. Anyone who was put into that situation would eventually snap. . Poor Remus...lol.

Really dragged out too long especially since it took more than half the story for him to get the damn potion and the other half to start the relationship.

That was amazing! I loved every moment of it and I can honestly say that this is the best 'love potion' story that I've ever read! For once, the victim didn't go back to normal in the middle of it and pretended to still be affected just to continue being lovey-dovey and there was actual character evolution! I'm still giddy about the emotional roller coaster that you've put Sirius and Remus through.

The plot fits the characters perfectly and your writing style is very pleasant. You've done a great job (one of the best I've ever seen, actually) in integrating that moment when Sirius told Snape how to get into the tunnel; the reasoning, the setting and the outcome were simply beautiful and I have to admit that I was on the edge of my chair when Remus was yelling at Sirius.

I love how the characters who are not involved in the main pairing make a difference to the plot, but are still human and have a great deal of substance. And I love you for not bashing Peter! I mean, yes, I know that he'll grow up to be a slimy traitor, but this is the time of the Marauders, when he was one of them and he was still the guy that James, Lily and Sirius would've trusted without question. Kudos for that!

The ending was just perfect and it left me with a really fuzzy feeling inside :). I admit that I would've liked to read a little reaction from Sirius as some more intimate memories came to him, but I'll just settle for imaging that for myself.

Regarding the moon: technically speaking, the moon is full only for a few seconds, but you can't make out the difference between 100% full moon and 90-something% full moon, so it appears as though it's full for two days or more. I'm guessing that may be the reasoning behind the 1 night of transformation per month that werewolves suffer: that the change is triggered by that 100% full moment and is reversed by the sun / moonlight being gone / whatever else. But the two-night transformation served a greater purpose here, so I'm not complaining :).

I know that this is a pretty old story, but I would've felt quite weird placing a story in my favourites and not letting the author know that I think they did a great job. This story was beautiful and I really, really enjoyed it. Congratulations on an epic piece of work!

Best regards,
CobaltAsh

that last sentence would b really akward especially since it was done in front of the whole class

Nice fic'! I like your sense of humour
The only little downside is the occasional grammar mistakes: since English isn't my first language, I sometimes get confused ;)

The very thought seemed to evoke more want as his kisses got more desperate and he nearly ripped his own pants and undergarments off. A sort of primal lust seemed to take over as he descended on the one below him and, without any sort of preparation, push his way inside him. The tightness overwhelmed him and he let out a low groan. Sirius bit hard on his lip "Ah! A little gentler, if you don't mind." He struggled to say.

This part, I'm so sorry, makes me flinch so badly. I know this story is so old, but god damn it, you can never, never, ever, go in like that with anal sex. The ass does not lubricate itself like the vagina does, it's dry, needs to be stretched, and NEEDS LUBE. . .LUBE. If you went in without any of that, it would be tears, blood, screaming- not a pleasant experience. You need AT LEAST three things worth of stretching, a lot of lube in the ass and on the dick, it needs to go slow at first because it would hurt.
And sigh, I can't get over the fact that this is rape, too, since Sirius is under a love potion.

so great! it took me a while to read but it was worth it!

Arm is missing and check over some other things but good job and Yoshi!

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I had to look up some things and I found out that the Marauders managed to become Animagi in their fifth year, Remus is also a prefect and he became a werewolf because Greyback bit him when insulted him but I am guessing there is a reason for this? So Yoshi?

Grrrr...
Of not off and some other mistakes are all in there, good job.
Grrrr...
Yoshi: Yoshi!

Too not to and stop using ' so much, you cannot use it the way you're using it, all the time. Good job and Yoshi.