Ted Tonks is a Muggle so he wouldn't be in potions class.

I’m here because I saw your table at a Con and so far I’m hooked. The fic plot twist is unique and your writing is great. Thank you!

Didn't realize this was a Bible fic. Clicked on this story to read a good Snape/Lily story, instead got this
Catholic drivel! This is HP mate, ie; The Magical World. God does not feature in their beliefs.
Snape of all wizards certainly wouldn't have been fooled by it, his father may have been an ignorant
muggle, but he himself followed the beliefs of his witch mother. You have totally ruined Snapes'
character in this story.

This is an extraordinarily well written story. However despite the very intriguing first few chapters,
I am now feeling concerned about your characterization of Snape. By that I mean that he is is rather
of character. Some examples I will give is when he does his overly dramatic 'bow' he is in the habit of performing every time he does something witty or cool. (Snape would never do a ridiculous move like that, it's more like something James would do.) Another is the unlikely hooking up between Snape and
Sarah. In the books Snape is well known for his antisocial nature and unwillingness to form real
friendships and relationships. This fact is a major point in his personality. Therefore it is extremely
unlikely that he would suddenly go out with a girl he has only known for a couple of months. over all
all though, there is very good writing here. The story flow is brilliant, and I never get bored.

Lily hugging Severus after he's unnerved by a brutal spell is something I like very, very much.

I am immediately drawn into this story and its premise. Young Snape feels very true to character, and so I'm eager to read more Snape/Lily interactions. Thank you for the lengthy chapters and spot-on dialogue. I can't wait to squeeze in a few more chapters today!

Well that was anticlimactic.

Nice good

Good

I skipped to the end and am disgusted that Sev ended up with that slag Lily Evans! He deserved better.

Stupid boy! Find someone who really cares for you!

Why doesn't Snape wake up and drop the idea of him and Lily? She obviously cares more for Potter than him!

Rather disappointed, I wanted the realistic angst but got Snape jumping uncharacteristically into a love interest right away. Lily tossed to the side rather quickly. I wish depression really did shift that fast I would be in a much better place. Well getting your dick wet (for the first time in Snape's case) is rather better than crying over turn of events. Even though he did tend to obsess and grasp on tightly to the past than letting go. I'll keep reading because it has more action then other stories but I do hope there is now suddenly sunshine daisies smothering the story from here on out.

Good

Should have left as soon as they got Remus. Screw Umbridge. Glad she's dead.