Good concept! I wonder if Sam is connected to the Allspark and it is just an extension of Sam.

This idea of a kinda childish/unknowing Allspark is highly amusing. Also, I agree on how its sentient. how else could they have come about.

PLEASE UPDATE, this is a really awesome fan fiction and I would love to read more! ヾ(**)ﾉ

This reminds me of the moment from Day Of The Doctor.

And another thing! :)

Since you've done a few LOTR x-overs with other fandoms... ever thought about being the first author on to do a TF/LOTR crossover? Seriously, I've searched! Actually I don't think I EVER came across a TF/LOTR fic on any TF or LOTR fanfiction site. Not the Micheal Bay movies or the G1 series or any of them. If you have please let me know :)

I place this review here to give inspiration since I found out you DID at least updated your other TF fic. I guess now I should put this fic on my alert list because of that. Now I'm going to go find something sweet to eat 'cause I wanna...

Ná Elbereth veria le, ná elenath dín síla erin rád o chuil lín!

*whines*

I clicked on this fic because I really like the 'government being assholes towards aliens and their allies' stories. Especially if Simmons and/or Galloway are playing the holier than thou jerks. Plus I wanted to read the scene that was in your summary, "You screwed up Sam. Megatron has the Allspark now. It's all your fault." Said the Sector 7 rogue agent. "Bumblebee can't help you now. Be a good boy and die." Sam smirked, brown optics flashing. "Who said I was Sam?"

And it wasn't even in your fic! *whines some more and looks dramatic about it*

*sniffles*

Since you haven't updated this fic in 3 1/2 years you probably lost interest (it happens) so I won't bother putting it on my alert list. I got way too many on their now. But I do try to leave a review whenever I do read a fic that interest me, abandoned or not.

Thanks for posting what you had and keep on writing!

awesome story i hope that you will update it soon

O.O UPDATE!

Wow...Sam has a God for a twin! I wonder what'll happen if Sparky realizes that given that they have the same body and name, most would think they are twin brothers? Now there's a thought! What if Sparky adopted Sam? (laughs)

Like the fic please post son!

-Karasu

You know you have me very much wondering how Sam will react to seeing a Twin! Or any of the Autobots! Especially Bee!

I'm hoping they'll meet with AS-Sam very soon before Megajerk corrupts him too much! But by the sounds of your summery, AS-Sam will run into Simmons first! (Ohh the BAD press!)

Wow, now THERE'S a twist to the storyline!

I love reading All-Spark Sam stories. They have soo much potential! Yours is promising as well.

D I really like what you're doing with this. Though the whole "Megatron-gets-the-allspark" plot device is cliched, you've managed to put a new twist on it. _ I like. Keep writing. I can't wait to find out what happens when the autobots find out. And the bit in the summary.

yea transformer got gender. see black arachnia for info. she is from beast war series sub series from transformer

yea review for the second Chap!

Good start. Please continue