i think that rufus really Needs to be braught down some big steps, even when it is his birthday...and teached a lesson in life.-he will not get everything!...
tseng is brother and should be rightful heir as rufus mother was only the Lover when i read it right... cloud also, and by all right sephiroth is part of family too over his father or mother... and sephiroth is to worthy for such a stupid kid as the wannaby heir...so i hope rufus will be married to a strong and jealousy female like tiffa or juffy (the ninja chick) as birthday surprise from his father_ to make alliance with an other strong family-clan to make new heirs...and let poor seph alone with his perv mind... (sorry but this guy only gets halfway bether and half good leader after many years, and i have a problem with Kids who think they own and get everything they want without care because dady can get People killed or taken care off...i think rude would be bether partner for seph than rufus...but i still think tseng cloud seph could be nice but i think you will go with rufus as it looks)
hojo would accept Cloud and even tseng as lover of seph but never rufus...when he gets some from him to impregnate a female to make seph babys.

but reno and zack are very cute and great that they find together
will be interesting to see where this Story really goes and what happns nex...hope you come back one day to finish this Story after 2010 last update and now its 2018t

wow...that was a real bad surprise i did not see coming (i really only did thik that cloud was drunken and meets tseng and hit on him real strong ad wakes up in his bed but nothing more than gropping or kissing was done but leaves a run hot tseng...)...but such a attack from this ass ...that is terrible what this bastard did in ch2...i so hope gets what he deserves...i would say break he finger and neuter him but that is not bad enough...or like being thrown in to one of hojos beast experiment who are horny...or something else bad...sold to the slums as toy to be used...who does this to an other being deserves atleast real hell to see what they did...

this seems an interesting story but i think Tseng and Sephiroth should learrn to share a partner both are interested in
and zack may have done something stupid with making cloud drunk at his Party he cant watch him all the time and cloud could easily end in the turk leaders bed when drunk to bad...i will see right in the next chap

Ahhh the rape ruined it. It just didn't fit the tone of the story and turned Cloud into a victim which was completely unnecessary. I could understand if you had built up a bit more plot and made the story darker, but out of the blue rape just made the whole thing awkward. At least you didn't romanticize it and make it Tseng doing the raping bit.

It would be great if you actually finished writing this story, rather than dropping it in the middle...

Update please I've been waiting forever

Update please I love this story, it's one of the best Tseng and Cloud stories out there. I've this multiple times and is eagerly waiting a new chapter.

I hope you will be able to continue soon :)

NOOOOOO why Cloud?

Love this two, great story, but maybe Cloud is bether sweeted for research and tracking of an possible "order" than a killer and i find it sad that Seph was so mean and did not fight or try at all to woo him...both could have easyly shared and two where bether to atch over Cloud than one, but atleast Tseng was a good guy and did anything he could for cloudy

but Rufus and Seph...nahh..more big brother like- but what do i know. hope that the bastard of old Shinra will get hit by a car together with Hojo!

i hope that you come back one day and write more chapters

I'm seriously totally loving this story! tseng and cloud is just so cidfredscfgjt x.x it's great. poor cloud, i hate it when he gets bullied D: and sephy being such a meanie.. I think him and rufus need to get together xD

I love this! Probably a little too much for my own good... Haha. everything is unpredictable and Tseng is just so gentle and tender and *squeels like a fangirl* I NEED A TSENG IN MY LIFE DAMN IT! XD

Why you no update T_T this is such a good fanfic, please update soon

Wow this is really good and Now I have THREE new pairing that I've fallen in Love with thanks lol can't wait for more :)

I have just found this story and just spent the whole day reading it. OMG! you have some serious talent. I see that you have not updated in a while and even if you don't finish this story it was a delight to read. Thank you so much!