Reviews for Once Upon a Valentines Day Dance |
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![]() ![]() Hiashi has a BOYFRIEND?! WHAT has the world COME to!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, that's the thanks they get for helping them get together. Hearing them moan haha |
![]() ![]() O.o |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto *shakes head* what else are they doing! Lol loved it, awesome job! P |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol great story! you might just want to check the line where you say 'Hiashi has a boyfriend as well as Hinata.' cuz im not sure u meant to type that. but if u did its funny as hell! lmao |
![]() ![]() ![]() omgg. that was really sweet. especially the end.. lol. naruto.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy crap! neji and tenten are getting the nasty on? hell yeah! i really enjoyed the fanfic regardless of whether it was very short or not! two thumbs up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww that's so cute! Naruto: Seriously what were they doing? Lavender: um go ask Kakashi! Naruto: Okay! Gaara: Dobe Lavender: Write lots more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *whistles* ...Wait a minute, I don't know how to whistle. -_- Oh well, *sigh* I liked the fic! Good job! Ja! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ! Yeah. I loveded it! I love reading stories were Neji is like, I don't love her, I don't love her, I don't love her, oh who am I kidding I love her. Kind of like that. Wow Lee can act. And don't you think that they would've thought that it was suspicius that Le gave up so easily? Dude, I guess love does that sort've thing to you. O.O You know what you should do? You should make a sequal to this But make it a Romance/Humor. And it be about all her friends asking her questions about what her relationship with Neji is. And you could just put in a bunch of randomness in it. Like having someone ask her what they did that night, and Tenten could say something like he came over to fix my TV. O.O And of course Naruto being Naruto would be like completely oblivious and actually fall for it. And then you could go on about like them asking if they are going out. Dude, It would be hilarious. Ok thats all to my really really long review. Story was awsome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uhh, you said Hiashi has a boyfriend. If you meant Hinata's sister, I think you should edit it and say Hanabi instead of Hiashi. I love the 'his clan is fine' part, though. Made me laughing out loud. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG THIS IS SO CUTE! FLUFFY! I LOVE FLUF X33 Love NeijiTenTen _ You need to write more fics DD Pleeasse! x3 Awesome fic! Also... I realised you put 'Hiashi has a boyfriend' and erm... Hiashi is Hinata's DAD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() GAH! THE FLUFF! ITS SO AWEsOME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Hiashi has a boyfriend as well as Hinata. Man did Neji hate Naruto." You do know that Hiashi is Neji's UNCLE. I think you meant Hinata's sister, Hanabi. Hiashi is Hinata's father... Anyways, loved the story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really cool, well done. |