BAWLING, you have me bawling over here! :'(

Wow... just... Christ, WOW. No words. Really, none to express how amazing this is. Words are cheap. Wonderful work.

Oh my god, this made me cry.

My dear, I think I'm a fan of this pairing because of you.

Keep up the great work.

Maybe the best fanfic I have never seen about this pairing (and, to top it, in Megatron POV).

I'm crying. I'm sitting here with tears in my eyes and I'm glad I read this. There were some spelling errors, but I'm not gonna call you on them, because seriously, in the face of the emotions and pain you've crafted, little details like those don't matter.

Oh, this story was fantastic! It made me cry so much towards the end! *wipes nose with tissue*

Btw, I'm not sure if you know this or not, but according to the Beast Wars Sourcebook, Terrorsaur didn't die, but went into stasis lock underneath the base. Though his Transmetal form is ugly in comparison to his previous form, he's alive! But apparently he and Scorponok don't wake up till after Megatron leaves earth. If I remember correctly though, didn't Waspinator get left behind on earth? *hint hint*

Sorrys, I just want a happy ending X3

This is by far one of the best fics I've read in ages. Veyr long, but I can understand you wanting to keep it a oneshot. Breaking it up over hapters would have messed with the flow.

You could use a proof read though.

... I honestly have no words to describe how I feel after reading this. It was... beautiful. Utterly beautiful. Gah!

Oh my God, this made me cry so hard!

I cried harder now than I did when I watched Terrorsaur die in the show when I was little. And, trust me, I was crying HARD back then. I always loved Terrorsaur and Waspinator.

BRAVO! Bravisimo! (cheers and claps) Tis Shelley again. Sorry if I'm driving you nuts, just wanted to review..like...after reading the story five times. Excellent. I loved it. You ahve done the impossible and an made me actually LIKE Megatron (laughs). Everyone was very spot on. I was astonished at how clearly I can see this pairing now in the episodes. I particularly liked that you explained why Terrorsaur instantly hated Starscream and was missing most of that episode beyond his voice actor having too many chars and the explaination behind why Waspinator so instantly despised Airrazor even though at that point I had never seen them in a confrontation. Just, PERFECT. I'm working on a bit of fan art for you, hope you don't mind.

Your fan, Onyx Nightfur/Shelley

Okay this is offically my favorite and the most beautiful BW fanfic I have -EVER- read! I absolutely loved this!

GUH. That was fantastic. Well-written, captivating, and thought-provoking. Megatron’s detached voyeurism was reminiscent of Hitchcock’s “Rear Window,” making the story somehow stoic and emotional emotional at the same time– a rarity in fanfiction!

I can’t believe it took so long for me to finally read it. :D

OMG, that was so freakin' GREAT! I LOVE THIS! T_T Even though I can only see these two as (good) friends, I still loved it T_T "sniffles" I felt bad enought over what happened to poor Terrorsaur, poor Waspy :( "hugs" If only things had been slaggin' different T_T Why did it have to be this way? "sags" Great story "sniff", but I hope that you write a happier one real soon /T_T

Wow... never thought I would say this but it makes me sad he died now! ;_;

*sniffles* Good story.

D8 That was beautifully tragic...

Truly amazing work with this. Your first place was well-deserved.

On another note, remember that plot-hole I mentioned? Yeah, I think I found a way around it, in case you were still planning on writing that sequel you were talking about. I forgot Waspinator fell in the CR tank when the surge hit. Perhaps you can work that into how he survived his bondmate dieing...