Reviews for Midnight Wings |
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Mystic Dragonsfire chapter 4 . 7/14/2013 You have a lot of spelling errors in this story. They screw up the flow, but other than that the story is good so far. I would recommend going back through and fixing the spelling though. |
You are an idiot chapter 1 . 1/22/2013 I don't care about your mindless chatter. This isn't even an enitre chapter. Stop behaving as if you're in your own world and get your head out of your hind end. |
Satire chapter 2 . 11/15/2012 Sister? Oh great. This keeps getting worse and worse. You've created a Mary Sue. |
Satire chapter 1 . 11/15/2012 Where do you come up with these crazy ideas? You're in your own little fantasy. This isn't reality. |
Voldyismoldy chapter 4 . 4/26/2008 oh stop crying I like this please write more or I will cry. |
anime gal22 chapter 4 . 4/26/2008 Like the plot line although I have no idea where it is going but I think I am hooked; however, I find a story difficult to read when there are a lot of misspellings/grammer issues, so I would maybe reccomend a beta reader to help work out some of that (I'd even be willing to help with the betaing if you wanted). I definitly want to see where this story ends up, so please update soon. |
Rubai Sora chapter 4 . 4/26/2008 Hm... I don't know how to put this... I guess I'll just say it as it is. There are several basic mispellings that spell check should have picked up. I was hoping they would have been fixed by now. A beta might solve that problem. Then some of the lines seem kinda flat. Not to mention the OCs are getting close to being Mary Sue-ish. They're not to that point yet since I haven't read enough of their characters yet to judge that. On a brighter note, you actually have me so intrested in the story, I've actually went past my morals and continued reading since I want to know what's going to happen next. Oh, you might want to enable annonimous reviews. That might give you somemore reviews. |