This was...interesting. A bit too awkward to read byt other thn that, GREAT!

LOL you're really good at writing funny smutt. It gives it an extra kick, makes it stand out from the rest. congrats on such a fab peice.

Ok, i'm off to read your other works now :D

Dude, that was unbelievable. *Starts burning up from the hot yaoi-ness* Air! I need air! *runs outside yelling "But I'll be back for more!"*

-mops up several pints of my own blood from the floor with half a box of tissues shoved up my nose-

That was so hawt and sexy. Then you had to be mean and stop at two chapters. T_T

But remember: it's not rape if you enjoy it!

You, my friend, are evil. I was so waiting for the next chapter, but then... no. -_-'

But it was soo hot *puffs* and I loove the way you write

ohh, that was really great! loved it! I'll be checking up for that Au... love seme L...

OHNO!I DONT WANT TO BE EATEN BY SIMBA!its a realy great fanfic!and i mean it!

MAN RIGHT NOW ITS COLD AS HELL AND MY HEATER IS BROKEN AND IM WEARIN GLOVES BUT GIRL U DID MAKE IT HOT AS HEL IN HERE! WAY 2 GO U GET A STICKER! .

you are trying to kill someone, I chocked on my cola gosh x'D

oh my god it's amazing! loved the way you pictured the dominant L. yup, the quiets are always the dangerous ones

you caused me a major nosebleed, now I'll have to clean my keyboard... lol

and Matsuda interruption, so funny, but gr x'D next time I'll keep Matsuda "occupied", then I'll come to read your fic muahahaha x'D

Aw it's a shame you kept this a two-shot! That would have been interesting to see

I miss plain ol' smut.

Sometimes, you just want smut xD this realy satisfied my craving for it. THank you so much.

no please continue! but o well if you are going to writew another one they yahoo! i will be waiting

Not continuing? WHY?

wow, definitely one of the most intense and realistic yaoi I have ever read. It did make the room hotter by about 5 million degrees lol. Keep up the writing it was fantastic and this is like the perfect pairing. Seme L and uke Raito hahaha poetic justice isn't it? ;)

Yes! Seme L! We need more seme L! With uke Raito of course...