my immortle by evence -how ev u spell it- LUVV UR WORK

break away by kelly clarkson - i think

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooo wait i mean yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeessssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssss ok thats betta

omg starfire did that in the 1st eva teen titans ep and the japan ep so awsome !

OMG cliffhanger. You. Must. Update. Soon. NOW! :D Thanks for such a awesome story!

can't wait for the next chappy! _

OH EM GEE! THIS IS AWESOME! by the by i have a request/question. I have a account on , my username is ipod77 (all lower case) and i would LOVE to do a picture of Kira for you if I can have some more detailed on how she looks! _

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I love your story!Update soon!

ano,I think you should put the defonitions for te people who don't know what all that I think your story is cute and I like it

your story is fantastic meow

. MEOW! sorry 'bout that i'm just obssessed with fanfic. I LOVE YOURS SO MUCH I CAN'T FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER I CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF IT! FANFICTION ROCKS! GOTTA GO I JUST CAN'T VERY LONG FOR FAN FICTION CHAPTERS TO COME OUT (OBSSESSION!) THANKS FOR THE AWSOME STORY SO FAR!

I really like it,I think its funny when Sakura and Sasori update!

Ouch! Lee that had to hurt. Why do you not like lee?

I really liked this chapter. Kira's a bit cold. (no pun intended) She just destroyed lees hand. I love the no nonsense attitude. Kudos and I'm glad you updated regardless of lack of reviews.

Arigato

~Yasha's Sis

I think I said this bfore, but you focus on Kira too much. You need to balance out the attention on the twins, so we have perspectives on both, and both pairings. Not just shove them into the same scene all the time.