“His stamina is greater than hers.ʖ

Gotta say I was expecting more this is a grest story but its left unfinished with a *Complete* tag on it come on that's just false advertising,

I feel bad like we are bashing this no name game haha. Like what did he do to deserve this treatment

Ok they punched me either in the feels I love the outcome of the fight

This is great story

Ok this says it is complete but it left a lot unfinished. Akatsuki, Orochimaru, Sasuke, Iron boar or whatever his name is. Not to mention the full lemon we were promised after the return. I can only conclude that you intend or intended a sequel to this and I can’t say I wouldn’t enjoy it. Please pick it up again soon

Naruto's attack names are really, really pretentious. They're only C-rank at best, using terms like "cuts Heaven and Earth" and "pierces the galaxy" is going too far; IMO that level of nomenclature should be reserved for S-rank attacks. Then again, it's kind of in line with the canon Naruto's character, but it'd be good to have one of the other characters tease him for pretentiousness.

Another point of critique: you said, about Naruto's first single-slash attack that "Using that technique took a lot of chakra and it wasn't like he could do it all day long." This doesn't really make sense; I cannot imagine that such an attack takes much more chakra than a Katon: Goukakyu. Definitely a LOT less than a Kage Bunshin. And since it is an established fact that Naruto could make HUNDREDS of Kage Bunshin BEFORE learning all those control exercises, he should, in fact, be able to throw thousands of these new wind slash attacks before running out of chakra.

All that said, thank you for writing this story! I'm really enjoying it.

I it comes up that you're asking "is it a good idea to tell them this secret" the answer is no and you shouldn't be trusted with said secret

I know I just posted a review but WHY are Zabuza and Haku going along with their enemies plan to split them up? Seems counterintuitive...

Naruto is a gennin and shouldn't be giving orders like this. Making suggestions sure, but orders? Big no-no in the chain of command. I'm holding out to see the supposed better grammar after chapter 10 and the general plot is good too so that helps. I'd like to point out that the characters this far are very ooc (except Shino and Iruka) and makes this fic have an extremely AU feel to it. It isn't horrendous, but their changed personalities erases a ton of conflict that could have been used to make the story stronger. This fic has a very "la-di-da" feel to itthere's zero tension. Not even the threat of Zabuza feels threatening if I'm to be completely honest. It's like reading the original story but in a drug induced haze. Anko is known for being wild out there but we don't even get people's reactions to when she's not. Also, on the topic of Anko... can we not ship a student and their teacher? Please? It's disturbing and is considered unhealthy in the real world. That being said, I do plan to continue reading this because, as I mentioned above, the basic plot is pretty good and worth wading through and (in my case) ignoring the parts that are not okay (RELATIONSHIPS BETWEEN TEACHERS AND STUDENTS ARE CREEPY *ahem* anyways...)

Please update soon

I hust got back into this fandom and have finally decided to read this fic. It's pretty good... though I kind of wish Anko was more like her canon self, but I cand deal with that.

Question if you are still around: Do you know any good Naruto/Anko fics where Anko is her semi-crazy, sadistic self? I love this pairing so I'd definitely like to read more of it

What are his elements

I don’t know if you even care at this point, nearly 10 years after the fact, but there is a repeated misspelling that has been bugging the ever-loving crap out of me. You use the word ”psychically” when you mean to use “physically,” or variations of those two. I usually just ignore typos, and read a story for the plot, but it keeps happening, and it really just gets under my skin, especially when you use it in the context of “he was fine psychically, but there was something wrong mentally.” This has been a great story, and I’ve enjoyed reading it, but every time I come across this typo, I want to bang my head against the nearest hard surface.

I know this story is complete and there is no reason to really review but Anko said in a previous chapter that he was onl;y supposed to release the gravity seal in a life or death struggle. This chapter contradicts that by saying she said never do it. How convenient!