AH! DONT STOP UPDATING HALLE-FRIGGIN-LUJAH!

I like this, but how old is Rose now and is Big Jay a preacher? Or a mechanic? Or both? I like the both perpectives thing. It works. Update soon please.

I really like this idea. It's good that you're showing the story from both Rose and Jackson's views. I feel so bad for Rose. Even though I know Jay is just trying to protect her, I'd go nuts knowing that my brother was so close to me but I still couldn't talk to him. This is all really good. And it's also good that you have a BETA. :)

awee loved the chapter. yaya J&M

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i hope jackson dosent get hurt to badly or at all but geat chapter. the more i read this the more i love it and want more. please update asap i love this story.

gabby611

aww i really feel bad for both of them. i hope they can see eachother soon. update please

gabby611

wow seems like she has it really rough. i hope she can see jackson soon! great chap i cant wait for more so please update soon!

gabby611

awe i really liked this cahpter. cna u like PM or IM of like how old is Jay and what does he look like?

anywho i loved it! update

okay cool u won't delete it

anywho loved it.

awe Jackson was there, i wodner what its gonna be like when Rose and Jackson reunite.

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I like the story line.

Update soon!

omg loved the chapter.

i love all the detail and stuf.

so yeah update and don't delete this story if u get tired of it!

wow this sounds really great. i love the whole thing so far. please update soon i cant wait for more. ].

gabby611

i like it good job:)

Sounds really cool! I like the idea.

Definitely keep going.

I want to see how Rose gets back in touch with her brother. :)

wow this story sounds awesome. i cant wait till you review. i hope she gets to see him again. please review asap.

gabby611