Great characterisation. Just as good as your other HP stories.

just perfect character analysis of neville- it's terrible and so true- really hits on the phrase 'worse than death' that comes up again and again w/ the longbottoms. good job

Wonderful, of course, just like your others!

This was just beautiful. I thought the next to last line was particularly well done.

I wish I could write a review that expresses what this little story made me feel, but I couldn't even find the right words in my own language, let alone in English. I always liked Neville, especially after the scene in , because I can relate to it.

Reading your story reminded me of this again, and I think although such a thought is bitter, I can imagine Neville sometimes thinking along those lines.

Thank you for writing this.

~Nivalis~

Short, but there is probably room to expand. Interesting insight in to Neville, it is easy to see why he would want his parents to have died as Harry's had, rather than endure their pain.

That was...powerful.