You know what? I'm tempted to say the Cullen retiring, then getting his old job back scenario could never happen. But such a thing happened at my work, so I guess it's possible. I like Sully turning out to be a bad egg, but not sure that I like him being brought back up again...

Pretty good writing. I thought the emotional aspect of things was a bit on the light side.

Aw cute ending. Sad it is the ending though.

keep on typing

* hannah *

GOOD

Fantastic story. Loved it from beggining to end. Great job! :D

good job!but after the initial slow pace of the fic i felt the ending was a little abrupt...maybe u could do a little one shot sequal of how its going for them now?i love sequals!i enjoyed reading this!thanks!n good job once again!

I was totally seeing a "I could never compartmentalize, Bones." thing going on... but this was just as good. Loved this story all the way! and you stayed under 20 chapters! you're my hero!

Practice does make perfect!

heya this is like the best in the whole intire universe!

shame its ended owell. Keep up the good work love it!

LOL great ending!

Can't wait for more!

excellent finish to an excellent fic. Congratulations.

HBF

loved it, loved it, loved it! thanks so much for writing this story...love it very much! the end was very cute :D love B&B so much

awesome ending

hahahaha wonderful... with a hint of humor in the final, really good...

HawkAngel

oh boy, sounds like bones doesn't want that line back. look forward to more soon