Reviews for Our Sweet Romance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So cuuuute! The steamy sort of sweet that gives me cavities. But so good |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the basics structure of what a relationship between these two would be likes. This was nots just a fuck, buts you coulds actually feel the love in each sentence. Aideu Ands remember, don'ts apologize for somethings you enjoyed! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amazing!You're now officially on my favorites list! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pretty fluffy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved it. simply loved it. it was sweet and sexy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! So fluffly that it makes me want to just hug it! :3 great job! i love ur story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! So kawaii! It was really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you wrote: (Plus they couldn’t go to one another’s house because Sasukes was watched after the Orochimaru thing)_ they only watched sasuke's house? Seems like they would have Sasuke followed as well-doing one without the other doesn't make much sense. He could do far more damage away from his house than in it. Also-you used the word 'boy', 'boys', 'the boy' and other variations of BOY 30 times in this short story. Should come up with other descriptive words. I noticed a lot of it in the brothers who love each other story as well. Other than those 2 pretty minor things-the story was entertaining. thanks for sharing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! That Wonderful Forbidden Love! That Sasuke blushing think at the end, was zo cute! xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() How cute! lol i loved it thanks for uploading :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahahahahahah! sasuke blushed! XD this was GOOD! i loved it! romantic and smexy! XD the perfect combo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing, and I really enjoyed it! Thank Goodness...this was so IC! You captured them perfectly, and this was such a wonderful oneshot. This is going into the favs. This has brightened my day! You're an amazing writer, awesome job. ~DizziKatz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww how sweet I loved this story nice job_ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story ! Cute end |
![]() ![]() ![]() How cute. Just so you know, it's El Fin. Sorry, I'm Dominican. |