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VryUnique chapter 10 . 7/8
So Mike was hanging all over some girl at the casino? The same way Bella was hanging on Edward? Hypocrite! Again, they are not dating. Going out to diner one night does not make a relationship. Bella already made it pretty clear she didn’t even want to date him so I’m not seeing the problem. Cheating at the casino? I’m shocked, really shows a lack of character.
VryUnique chapter 6 . 7/7
How can Mike be cheating on Bella when they’re not even a couple? So Mike talking to another girl at the pool was wrong but there was nothing wrong with Bella massaging Edward’s back? I don’t think Mike did anything wrong and putting peanuts in his food was really really wrong. Alice was right, he could have died. I think that would even be considered assault today, not even sure what that was suppose to accomplish. All it did was cut there date short and not show his character. I would like to know what the big plan was, I was waiting for it. It couldn’t have been peanuts because they didn’t even know he was allergic.
One of the girls should have pointed out Mike flirting at the pool to Bella and than she could make her own decisions.
VryUnique chapter 5 . 7/7
Bella letting two guys rub their hands all over her just seemed wrong.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 6/16
Hey so I know I’m probably years and years and years late and you might not see this, but just so you know if you do I think this story is cute and funny and I loved how you used the book names
vampirelady13 chapter 6 . 1/22
Again Bella is fucking an idiot that does not deserve someone like Edward. Like I said already Alice and Rose are shitty friends. I think Edward needs to have a girl of his own sense Bella is stupid.
vampirelady13 chapter 5 . 1/22
I think Edward should flirt with different girls Bella s loss she can have Mike. Poor Edward gets stuck with no one. Wow I would hate to have friends like Rose and Alice they said nothing to Bella about that sleaze Bella is an idiot.
vampirelady13 chapter 4 . 1/22
So Bella is sending letters to Edward making a dinner date with him. Then she is going out with Mike the next night. I think Edward should find another girl if it was me Bella would have lost her chance with me.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/5/2019
I haven't missed the references to Canon-Alice's precognition!
Aakruti chapter 23 . 4/30/2019
I totally love it! This chapter, the whole story, everything! And i'm reading it for the second time!
Aakruti chapter 1 . 4/16/2019
OMG OMG, its so AMAZING! I loved the whole story! I can't keep it out of my head! I was taken by the soft, slow love and the pain they felt when they had to separate and when the guys wore the girls' articles coz they missed them! Its LOVE!
Aakruti chapter 14 . 4/15/2019
This fanfic is just LOVE. I dedicate the song "turning pages" to how Edward, Jasper and Emmett felt for Bella, Alice and Rosalie respectively.
Guest chapter 23 . 5/26/2018
were I Rosalie, I'd make sure that Emmett made a trip to the hospital for a little SNIP-SNIP!
Michelle Law chapter 23 . 6/2/2017
I LOVED this. Dang, those Cullen boys are fertility Gods, no? AND I loved that the babies were born so close together. TRIPLETS! Better Rose than me!
Michelle Law chapter 19 . 6/2/2017
That is my favorite scene from Romeo and Juliet. I love how she denies him at ALMOST every turn AND manages to get an extra kiss out of it!
Guest chapter 6 . 5/7/2017
So awesome, love this story!
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