All I can say is wow it hade action,romance,and depression it’s perfect ;)

This chapter was too much I loved it if you know what I mean by too much :)

Was this chapter even necessary?

Can you spread the word to other authors to stop "Centering" their stories, it is annoying!

Umm isn't Percy dead? Then how come he is mentioned in chapter 29.
Anyway, this was such a nice story. Thanks for sharing!

Voldermort! Really?!

Okay, so i just went on your profile and it says you're from the UK.
I must say I didn't expect that.
You use so much American slang that it's genuinely off-putting to read the story. There's not much I hate worse than reading a British story, and having that much American slang in. It dumbs the story down.

Greenbay? Isn't that in the USA? You do realise Harry Potter is set in Britain, don't you?
Also, its just a Shopping centre not a 'mall'

Epilogue is sweet _
I LOVE THAT DRAMIONE IS SHIPPED BY SUCH GREAT AUTHORS!

I have been reading Dramione since last 3 years...you are one of the few authors that will remain with me .Keep writing! DRAMIONE FOREVAH!

I love your stories! Amazin!

*Snicker* Stupid, stupid weasel ..*More Snickering*

UGH

Okay first things first, sweety is actually spelt sweetie. Second of all, (and this is quite a large compliment as I am absolutely addicted to Dramione fanfics, so I know what I am talking about;) this was probably my fave fanfic yet, or at the very least definitely in the top 3. So nice job!

Yes! Yes! Baby freakin' Yes! Sirius and Snape are still alive! Shame about Tonks and Remus. Oh, and if you want an alternate ending to Harry Potter, just search, "how Harry Potter should have ended." It is really good and funny.