Reviews for Slow dancing in a burning room
chester258 chapter 1 . 5/24/2018
I love this story. I am sad to see that it is not being continued.
Alley cat gray chapter 6 . 4/16/2016
Please continue I really want to read more I love this story it is getting good. I also loved the part were she sings the song from the movie all dogs go to heaven I love that movie it's so cute
keme chapter 6 . 5/9/2015
Ok so when they are having sex naruto is the top and sasuke is the bottom..yet i fobt ubderstand who the hell is the mother?

Ps;this is what i have understanf in the story
Hinatauchiha1 chapter 6 . 11/13/2014
Ah aha he may end up pregnant again hopefully
Hinatauchiha1 chapter 2 . 11/13/2014
Ok I understand that she wants to know about sasuKe but it's just like she wants to go after him if she could it seems like an ungrateful kid all she thinks is sasuke and herself and what about naruto all he went through and now is going back to the hell hole just for her that's kinda mean of her after all he has done for her and he thinks more of her other father kids
Starless Night chapter 6 . 2/11/2014
I just love this kind of SasuNaru stories it's been a while since I read one and I've been looking for a good one I found yours I read it and is unfinished Are you crazy?! Lol
This story is amazing I love i! and it would be a waste not to finished it. I would love to know if Sasuke finally meets his daughter Haruhi and dinally tell Naruto that he loves him and be a family.
I can't wait for the next chapter this story is awesome I see its been a while since you updated but the story is worth finishing is great.
You are a great writer I hope you finish it
Pleeeeeease Update Sooooooon!
Take Care! ;)
vocaliodlover16 chapter 6 . 4/17/2013
you better I just got done and LOVE IT you so have to write another chapter pllz this is sssssssssssooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooo good I love it pppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp plllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll llllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update I really want to see what happens next
Blaque Lotus chapter 6 . 10/10/2012
please finish this story
Wolfworrier911 chapter 6 . 10/2/2012
i luv ur story! please update soon! :3
Guest chapter 6 . 8/14/2012
please update
kai chapter 6 . 12/9/2009
its been a while since ive read this fic and when i read the new chapter i had forgotten most of what happend or just locked it up somewhere in the back of my its good that naruto and sasuke still want each other and know the other feels the sasuke went with his instince to find the weak chakra sasuke gets back and sees his daughter wonder how hes gonna react to and the other will they catch on to the fact that narutos taken or not or maybe their reactions will be like the manga/anime cant wait for updates rootin for them
mimi chapter 6 . 12/9/2009
instincts seem to be always right in leeding you to people you care to know that everyone still misses naruto even sasuke(though hes not back to the village yet either)wonder how everyones gonna react to naruto being back and if anyone remembers that haruhi said he was reaction to haruhi will be rich too well hope you can update soon really enjoying this
iyfanatic chapter 6 . 11/8/2009
Great fic! I actually found this over on Mediaminer first, but then realized that it was also on this site, and with an extra chapter... I was so excited! :) Anyway, kudos on integrating the "Kyuubi heat," "mpreg with missing father," and "missing-nin" plotlines so well! Loved it.
5Angel chapter 6 . 8/23/2009
Wohoo! I remember reading of Haruhi for the first time, seeing her so alive, vivid and fresh with biting realism. She's insanely smart like the Teme yet observant without seeming so, like the Dobe. Been waiting and silently hoping that you wouldn't let this fall on the side as both Haruhi, her history, SASUNARU (their) story - enraptures.

What happened to S'uke? LOL how come the Dobe is here without the Teme, how could the Teme have let him go? Yikes, as usual the update led to more questions which I like and look forward to having the answers, I really liked how Sasuke immediately curbed Naruto's "new determination" of giving up on him rather than have it play on, as well as the extra intel on what "happened". Nice to know Hinata is naturally compassionate.

Thank you for this update, I gleed seeing it, to know you're not giving up on it. Wishing you a plethora of inspiration and choccies for your muse :)
Madidi chapter 6 . 7/30/2009
okkay.. so.. I love this fic.. and yah.. I hope that you will update this soon.. hmm.. I checked your reviews.. and you had like 21.. when it's supposed to be around.. 2100 hehhehehe.. really.. I read this when you first put it up.. and I was already pretty sure that you were never going to write more to it anymore.. O_O And then.. uwah! it's in the updated stories.. yab. I immediately recognized the name of the story.. because I really liked the name the first time I happened to find this.. hihhi.. so.. I'm realy dissapointed to see that Sasu was uke for some reason.. since.. it's marked as SasuNaru.. and.. all.. but.. then again.. I'm pretty sure that Sasu won't be the uke anymore.. and that it was only a one time thingy occurance.. ".. since Naru was pregnant.. and it is marked as SasuNaru.. soo.. I think I still will continue reading this.. and 'forgive' you this time.. x3 besides it's good that Sasu gets to feel how it is to be the bottom.. since then after that he can try to be the seme.. hehehe.. and feel that it's more of his thing.. hehee.. " Welps. yah.. I can't wait for Naru to meet up with all his friends.. heheheh.. they will be so shocked.. oh yah.. and you could make Shikamaru realize that Haruhi is actually both Sasu-kun and Naru-chan~'s daughter.. instead of Naru being just a 'temporary care taker'.. hihhii.. since Shika's our very own genious.. x3 hhm.. oh and of course there is also the whole 'Sasu getting to know that Haruhi is their daughter.. issue.. ' that I can't either wait to see.. x3 oh! and also.. it would be soo sweet if Naru became pregnant again.. since they met again.. and well.. they did some 'stuff'.. hehehe.. x33 that way Haruhi would get the sibling that she wished to have.. and Naru would have the help of Tsunade in the matter this time.. aand.. they would only notice it like around the third month.. since I've understood that that's when the belly starts to show.. " and soo.. Tsunade would actually have to tell it to Naru.. because kyuubi would be all 'Heheh kit doesn't even notice that he's going through something familiar..' heheh.. that sadistic furrball.. x3.. yaah.. and then Sasu would like come back to the village around the ninth or eighth or seventh month.. and all.. heheh.. although I guess that Naru would have to tell his friends this time.. since they would start to wonder why he had resigned from missions for a year or two.. heeh.. (Oh mi Gawd! Make him have twins! uwwaah.. like some pranking sweet heart twin boys! x3) " welps.. yaah.. I was supposed to give you a short review.. but.. when I get on the run.. then it just somehow keeps expanding.. hihhii.. x3 but yaah.. those are all just suggestions.. and all.. soo.. I'll be waiting to see what you decide to do.. " Thank you for providing this amazing story for your readers! (such as me.. ") and thank you for continuing this and not dropping it.. (although I'm not really that sure of it being that long a time.. heehhehe.. since my life's what it is.. soo.. a week can feel like a year to me and vice versa.. o_0 " Welps.. I hope to see you update this soon darling! welps.. Ja mata ne! 3
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