Reviews for Fire VsWind |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Please do continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope to see a sex scene! Please continue soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O, update! Just a little problem: I got quite confused as to what was going on. I mean... part of the time, I had to slow down my reading... Probably, if you check through your chapters and correct any mistakes. And, each time a new person speaks do a new paragraph. Makes thing much more clearer, by that much! That's what I do, anyway. Don't mean to nag you, just giving advice. UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thats a weird paring, but I like it. Update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() ohh man I wish there were more blaze and espio romances good story keep updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Espio and Blaze unusual couple but it's good I hope to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, this is pretty good. I'm definitely gonna want to keep track of this. |