I like the story, I really do. But have you ever considered having someone go over it and do a spelling and grammar check? Or doing your self? There are a lot of little mistakes and a few really big ones...

nice Les Mis reference

enjoyed this story. Love Gambit!

I'm really enjoying the story so far. I think its very well written, especially for a fanfic. It's also rather horrifying. I like how you wrote some of the soldiers and doctors as being very affected by what they see, as being sympathetic, but not really able to help. I think it makes for more realistic characters, adding more depth, than having everyone working there being sadistically evil. The General is rather terrifying too. I hope Remy is rescued soon! There are spelling errors, but none of them detract from the story, so I really wouldn't worry about it. So far, nothing has been glaring, or kept the meaning from being clear.

Okay, got a few things to say about this fic.

First, holy crap! Loved it! The best "Remy gets tortured in prison" fic I've ever read! Thank you so much for posting this!

Second, loved the irony of the Surgon. How angelic his powers are, yet he's in prison for the most horrendous of crimes. Awesome touch there.

Third...eh, could have sworn there was, OH YEAH! The spelling. While it was distracting for me, and as much as I wish you'd let someone beta it, I loved the fic enough to overlook that. Thank you again for posting!

Great story!

I haven't seen any "spelling problems". Your spelling is great! The only thing I've seen that you get words like; are and our, plan and plane, mixed up.

From one dyslexic to another, you are a great writer! Master the word mix ups and no one will be able to tell you are dyslexic.

Oh my gosh, that was unbelievable! I absolutely loved it! The few spelling errors couldn't take away from the awesomeness of your story!

Yes, well worth the read

Good story, very well written except for the horrible spelling mistakes (the English and French ones). I would strongly suggest the help of a Beta the next time you decide to write something. Good work like I said, but the spelling was at times very distracting because I had to figure out what you meant.

one word: awesome!

I was hoping to get more story about what lead up to all this (the government 'take over' what not and all that) but it is a very good story still!

An amazing tale that had the potential to be much deeper and longer. If you ever get the chance, you should expand this story and go on to discuss the general and the government in greater detail.

Gemini

I think this story has a lot of potential, but there are major spelling and grammatical errors that make it difficult to read.

This story is f*ckin fantastic. I loved every word in it. A ROMY ending would've been better for me, but I like it this way too. Keep up the great work!

I really liked your story, I really hope that there is a sequel.