Wonderful. Simply wonderful.

I'm sorry I haven't had the good fortune to come across your work before, but it is truly brilliant and shows your great talent. I really feel for Kai, the guy who is usually so confident and macho...and yet has no-one to love him. Beautiful stuff. Definitely favouriting.

Cypress Scholar.

... This was so cute. xD I sort of wish Rosemary might've noticed though... She's kind of clueless about that, eh? I'm sort of hoping that Tyler and Popuri would end up together. XD This way Kai could've came in and stole Rosemary or something...

Wow...so...Kai loves Rosemary, and Rosemary loves Tyler, and Tyler loves Popuri, and Popuri loves Tyler, and nobody loves Kai? I wish this wasn't just a fourshot...I wish it was like an effing Imax movie. You're always able to make me see every detail that you write, and hear every word everyone is saying. A cheesy and overused thing to say, but I really do mean it.

I like it a lot! I can't wait for the next chappie! See ya soon!

Ohh, lovely.

What's funny about loneliness is that, no matter how many people say they care about you and surround you, you can still feel so alienated that all those people don't matter. When like Kai, you may be inches away from the person you love, but you're the only one who knows how you feel. And that, in itself, makes you feel more lonely than anything.

My favorite part would have the ending; the irony in what Rosemary wants is the one thing she can't have, that she doesn't know it, but she and Kai are sharing the same pain.

I...loved it. Loved it, loved it, loved it.

Wow..this is just beautiful!You described their emotions so well and it's just really beautiful!

*blows nose in tissue* Beautiful. Simply beautiful. Wonderful job with the emotions and the descriptions.