This is utterly terrifying to me, but very well written. Thank you for the story :)

This awesome and creepy at the same time. I love it. I don't really care if you continue, this seems complete to me

daaamn this is the Sasori I loveee, his freaky ness

Phenomenal story and I do hope you might continue this down the road. Sasori is on point and your writing overall is spectacular.

I actually read this and shuddered. You captured him so clearly it was like a movie going on behind my own imagination, evoked by your words.

It would be incredible if you continued this, but it does well by itself. Mostly because I'm pretty sure the pairing is basically doomed for nothing other than agony on both sides. Mostly on Sakura's side. Though I would be delighted to see how you explore Sasori's experiments. The idea pleases me in a dark way.

Best of luck and thank you for your talents! It's rare to find good Saso/Saku at all.

Ooh this is fascinating, and I love how twisted he is, that k you for writing this :) hope you continue it haha

Hey there~
I loved this story, very much so! simply adore the idea of Sasori getting Sakura as his puppet, in fact I'm even cosplaying as Sakura being his puppet, yes! :D
There don't seem to be enough fics on this topic, so it felt like a blessing to find your work. I am in fact a SasoSaku fan to the core, can't believe I didn't find it sooner, shame on me!
Smooth going, nice storytelling, beautiful in-character for both of them. What a shame you don't consider sequel, it'd turn up amazing, I am sure.
Thank you for sharing!
EviRuha (:

I would love for this to be continued. To be honest, I love this pairing. It is so warped and twisted love, if you could call it that, perhaps it is more an obsession. Either way its more unique and interesting then most other works of literature.

I can't wait for the next capture!

I did not expect fluffy story, but this is creepy. And I like it :) thank you for writing and sharing!

This piece is by far the most ruthless form of foreplay that I've ever had the pleasure of encountering.
It was dangerous and did more than send me over the edge.
It was delicious and utterly cruel.
Sex without the promise of an orgasm.
If you intend to leave this as it is then you are one merciless woman.
But I will follow this story in hopes seeing what you might have in store for us.
Damn it, this is going to prevent me from sleeping for days on end.

Love it :) I do hope you continue this!

Sasori... Is really such a freak. WTF.
He's using her to... feel? Does that mean he'll use her to feel pleasure, and when she's hurt, he'll just kind of back off?
Eww.
I like it.
XD

Uhmm, since dawning was finished already, would you considetr expanding this? It ws really great and interesting. I really loved it.

... I read this over at AOO and had to follow it here just in case you did continue it.