| Reviews for The Forsaken |
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   SandyLee Potts chapter 7 . 6/2/2013 Thank you for writing such an awesome story. I know you've written one more primeval which I intend on reading, but wonders if you could write more. Super story. I loved Connor the hero and wished we could have more of this Heroic Connor. |
| beckerandjess4eva chapter 3 . 9/9/2011 ooohh... i think that chapter was very good, very good plot and i enjoy the way you write. Good chapter |
| beckerandjess4eva chapter 1 . 9/9/2011 love it! |
| Gemma72 chapter 7 . 8/29/2011 This is a great story. Love a bad ass Connor! |
| edwardfiend chapter 7 . 8/25/2011 Really really liked this. :D |
| aunteeneenah chapter 7 . 7/20/2011 "A strange yellow mess seemed to be growing from his arm" LMAO! I loved this. It was exciting and really showcased what Connor could be . . .not the weakling who has to be protected, but a man of action who can take care of himself and everyone around him. God job, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. |
| aunteeneenah chapter 6 . 7/20/2011 I was a tad confused but figured it out. Must finish . . . |
| aunteeneenah chapter 3 . 7/20/2011 Amazing. |
| aunteeneenah chapter 1 . 7/20/2011 I decided to start at the oldest stories and work myself to the present and I'm glad I did. This is a great start and if the rest of this is as good as the beginning, I'm gonna be a really happy camper! I'm hooked and have to keep reading. |
| ebuchala chapter 7 . 5/12/2011 Excellent story! Great pace, good characterization and lots of action-thoroughly enjoyed it. I know this is several years late but, although I've been watching Primeval for a couple of years now, Primeval fanfic never crossed my mind until recently. |
| TheRandomOneStaringAtYou chapter 7 . 1/2/2011 and i didnt review this one either! bloody hell what am i like! considering this is one of my fav primeval stories ever... it's insane! ridiculous. you should be a writer. amazingnessssss i could go on... i could gush for hours in fact.. but it's late so i wont. more primeval stories please! :) xx |
| fullhans1 chapter 7 . 4/10/2010 Good story. |
| mw chapter 7 . 12/18/2009 *standing ovation* fantastic! best connor story i've read! loved every word thanks! |
| mw chapter 3 . 12/18/2009 freaking awesome so far! love where connor has been and what happened to him fantastic whump! reading on... |
| dinosaurbreakfast chapter 7 . 9/21/2009 Its a bit late so excuse me if I'm not coherent. I loved this fic, it was absolutely brilliant, and quite honestly one of the best, most creative 'Primeval' peices I've read. I wish they all could be like this. I was truly excited. You wrote the characters all extremely well and believably. My question is: what are you doing in fanfiction? Go write a novel! |
