Okay the concept is good but the progression of this story is weird. Don’t get me wrong, I’m just trying to point it out so you can improve.
Naruto is said to be rookie of the year but he loses to Hinata, doesn’t know basic chakra exercises and not even shadow clone before graduation. And Hinata just keeps cheesing the whole time with the woe is me thoughts.

Wasn't Naruto's goal to be Hokage? no one mention that in this chapter.

I think is bull that Sasuke is a jounin and Naruto not, when in this fic Naruto has always been ahead of him, I don't undertand it, futhermore of Sasuke's craziness, that wouldn't gain him points.

The ending was awful..it was not what i expected at all..good story but terrible ending

Stupid ending is stupid.
Felt like reverse-Kishimoto all along.

OK, I know this story is old and all, but really, the whole Sasuke thing is contrived. Would Naruto's dad really have a team lead by a classmate that they don't like? And Naruto... well, he promised he'd be as strong as Hinata, but he's just as childish an idiot as Sasuke is here - he doesn't have any confidence that Hinata loves him (because canon!Naruto would just laugh it off and call Sasuke an idiot with a cheesy grin).

Wow this ending was just...sad and messed up it was so depressing ,I really thought this was going to be like a "happily ever after"ending but instead it was a very sad ending

I am really starting to get tired of the naruhina Grand parent pairing

Here I was taking notes the whole story to give a nice review at the end, because I was happy to see a not terrible story that actually ended. Had a lot of nice data for you, including tons of advice you probably didn't need anyway because it has been six years, but I wanted to do it anyway.

And here I get to the end, and it's basically a massive, immature, fuck you that had literally no warning. This has been a waste of a week of my free time, and any respect I had for you is now gone.
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At-least put an "actually abandoned, not completed" message in the first chapter. That way new people don't have to suffer your bullshit.

Ugh.

now this is an intresting change of events

Naruto might have the other half inside of him

Tats one sick demon

She's back to calling her Kushina-sama?

What about Minato? They just left him there alone?

I don't even know where to begin on this chapter. It's really weird with Minato being the one who pulls this together. It's really well done and makes this novel worthy, rather than a piece of fan work. In that I salute your hard work and excellence in your work. Well done.