Hehehe. Nailed the personalities of those characters good, you certainly did.

And Ratchet teaches the twins what a field medic is

Bravo! I love this introduction between the twins and Ratchet! Everyone was wonderfully in character and the (almost) fight, had me on the edge of my seat! Obviously, the medi-Bot would win that one, but wow! What a contest! Great writing!

Love the last few lines! Hope there is more to this!

Eminnis

LOL, you showed his Ratchet! Sunstreaker, you just got told!

Awesome, absolutely awesome! I loved this so damn much and can't wait to see what else you have in your profile!

Oh Primus! ROFL! XD

I LOVE THIS!

excellent!

PFFFT! LOL! Thats funny! Sunshine should no better . . HATCHET!

*Dodges wrench*

Thats his fault that son of a fragger!

Love Ratchet and the got his ass handed to him.

As for that sly officer as hell!

Good job!

nice

Ah, poignant and funny. This was wonderful. I love the twins and Ratchet? He da man.

I think this kinda hit Ratchet right on the spot-his temper, his sarcastic voice, his dedication to his profession, as well as his deadliness when he choose to show it.

"I don't give a steaming pile of slag about whatever screw-headed alpha games you wanna play around the base. You can strut around like some king of the mountain for all I care but you will not come into my med-bay and start tossing orders around. And so help me Primus if you get some fool-headed idea of interfering with me when I'm working on a patient I'll personally hand you your head on a platter." His voice had risen slowly until it was a quiet roar. "Do. I. Make. Myself. Clear!"

-Has to be the best Ratchet rant to come across.

"Ah, lad. That's not what a real medic does. And I'm sorry if that's how you and your brother have been treated."

- This accurately reflects him, as a medic, truest to his profession.

Words cannot be properly formed...*chokes with laughter*...

absolutely hilarious!