Cute.. I think it's Alucard's voice; "Integra... Integra..."

Well first off let me start off with the wording. The way you describe things in such detail and personification I can imgaine it as if I was standing there and watching things playing I think your comparison of Frollo and Maxwell is competely accurate. I also like your little Disneyism. He saw corruption, everywhere except within.. The way you build this story up is excellent. And the ending sentence wants to make me think Alucard has been there the enitre time and is watching Integra's little epihany.. A very enojoyable read, altogether.

This story is brillant. I love Enrico!

I enjoyed all the religious imagery in this - normally so many references would have been OTT but I think it works well in Hellsing.

I also liked your comparison between Frollo and Maxwell, it adds to the idea of "forbidden fruit". Well done.

Oh my God, Oh My God, Oh my God, I love this! I was clinching my hands in anticipation!

Why does everyone think that integra and alucard are getting it on? Alucard just like annoying her to no ends but respects her and alucard is (along with Walter) Integra's only companions.

But you write really well, the quotes from the bible 'how does it feel to be defiled by a catholic, Integra?'

Did maxwell and integra really kiss? Or was it Maxwell's imagnation, that i couldn't quite understand.

Personally I'm not a fan of ExI, but this was great fun! I loved the interaction between the two.

Though they didn't say who his father was I would have to agree with you opinion on that Enrico is the son of a Count. He seems like the child of a snobbish, rich a$$.

Love the Hannibal reference, first of all. The detail was incredible, and beautiful. I love the scene you set, and your Inegra was perfect. And Lilith! How perfect, all things considered. As for the ship...well...

Well done, overall.

Cheers,

Madm_05

I really liked this!