aw thats so sweet :)

cam

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omg. amazingness in a oneshot. its like love in oneshot form. haha. loved the last line. i think that made the story amazing.

madison

oh, and i love happy people, so heres your dandy review. C

wow. that was wicked cutee.

uh-DOR-able! Luved it!

xxaccebxx

Yeah, I'm a bit behind on this but I only just found it and it's absolutely amazing. I love it, great work. :D

Well done!

Julz, you could have even stopped at the end of the five-year-old prelude. Short, it's still good enough to stand on it's own. Yes, the story is predictable, but in the good way. "Good way?" you say. Yes. You know how you can know after page 3 just what is going to happen, but it's so good that you can't put down the story anyway, the movie that you sit through even though you figured everything out right after the opening credits? Yeah, that kind of "good." I enjoyed reading the story and was happy that there was a teenage version attached even knowing just what was to happen.

Thank you for an enjoyable read,

CraftyNotepad

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I'm sorry I was "too slow" to review this. :)

Very cute. I enjoyed the contrast of younger Lilly and Oliver to older Lilly and Oliver. One game cements a long~lasting friendship and another, a confirmation of a long relationship. As I said before, very cute. :)

...okaie...

Very clever :) I really liked the way you segued into the crayon scene, and I loved the last line... "Cue the fireworks." Nice!

That was really good. I liked it alot!

:)

Love this story! :)

Do I love it?

Hm... YOU BET I DO!

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cutte :) my friend was doing a new one, its like high five then when they put your hand up, you put yours down and say whos gay.. i guess its offensive to those who are, but yea.

I actually did a happy sigh at the end of this :D Lol so cute ]

cutest thing EVER.

of my life.

amazing

amazing

amazing.

GREAT.

okay,

done now ;D

-Annie.

Great Story! Write more! "Cue the fireworks," how cute!