Good sequel and interesting idea for the story plot. As in the prequel, what I enjoyed the most was how dearly and strongly Naruto was loved by his precious people. I'm also glad that he could get a rather happy ending, although I admit that the very same ending didn't feel quite as believable as the rest of the story. After all this suffering and being actually broken, it seemed to me as Naruto was a bit too composed, firm and easy to smile in comparison to how I believe a person so deeply traumatized and betrayed would behave, no matter how strong in character. I do believe that Naruto would be able to overcome the hardships and forgive and love wholly again, as well as to become a great leader, but not so soon after having all this trauma and memories viciously recollected, not after being so thoroughly broken and suicidal and damaged by the forced slave mentality after all these long years. So perhaps the ending felt rather rushed in this regard, a bit unbelievable.
Either way, I still think it's a great story and thank you very much for writing! :)

OMG as i was reading this i was listening to Lady Gaga's I like it rough as i was reading the last part and for some reason it seemed to fit it perfectly for some reason lol weird right? But anyway i loved this sequel, I thought it was cool and a little bit original, anyway anout to read the next one and i can't wait

I loved the ending it made me think "I know you don't like this prick but shut the fluff up and deal with it bc he ain't going nowhere anytime soon!" XD my train of thought so weird lol

awww damn it I wanted them to be fried in deep shit . . . you guys hear nothing. Luv the plot

ohhhh they in bad shit now!.

le gasp. Whyyyyyy . . . I'll be right back I need to ummm steal the infinity stones for a sec. (runs and screams 'THANOS')

ohhh naruto eating his ramen warmed meh heart!

ohhhhhhhhhhh I bet it was hinata! ahhh hinata he looken for his mate not you. . . I'm sorry not really a fan of hinata. she married soooo i think it best that she back the f*ck off of sasuke's mate! and again i sorry. DON'T HATE MEH

awwww sasunaru will always be my ultimate OTP in the universe all through meh lie. AND NOT EVEN THANOS CAN STOP MY OTP!

omgomg i wanna cry in shizune arms too !

awwwww naruto is his mate and sasuke is his. whenever i read my favorite otp I cry (weep weep in a corner)

ohhh the plot getten intense XD

ohhhh whyyyyy konohamaru whyyyyy

awwwww. sasuke stop being so stingy!

ohh Ren421 your killing my heart right now! Love yo work tho.