Reviews for Prove Them All Wrong
Guest chapter 13 . 7/4/2019
Wow this story is a mess. Inconsistent plotline, unnecessary plot twist and terrible characterizations that don't fit into hat is plausible reactions and actions, dumb and unnecessary pairings, and overused cliches. Even the guy you wrote this story for, KingKakashi, doesn't approve of some of the shit you wrote. No wonder the story is dead. You wrote yourself into a corner, all for pretentious drama.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/4/2019
What the fuck is this bullshit? My fucking god, what is up with you people making Naruto a fucking pussy? Take this bullshit and go suck it in a corner. Do that, while your mother rides a train with a bunch of random men. Hopefully they'll give her a better kid than whatever piece of irrevocable trash you turned out to be. You don't need a doctor to prescribe you the best medication for your bullshit
: suicide.
Kingkong101 chapter 13 . 5/29/2019
Lame
Vince Basile Jr chapter 13 . 2/26/2019
Please come back and finish this please, this is amazing and I want to see how it ends please come back with this.
Revanchist21 chapter 12 . 10/25/2017
This story is very interesting and I really hope you will have more chapters in the future soon since this story is getting good! Keep up the good work man!
Grim24 chapter 3 . 9/1/2017
My friend recommended me this story so i was like well might as well give it a try and i tell you i'm really disappointed actually now i'm judging you considering that i only read it 3 chp of it but man your Naruto is emotional cracked, especially how he is treated badly and he still want to become a Hokage telling that Naruto might have a problem with his head plus the negative review that i saw after reading chapter 3 push to quit reading it anyway like i said this is my only opinion but Naruto shouldn't reall become Hokage and follow the cliche route instead build his own village but it's your story man so i'll just have to respect whatever route you're going, anyway good luck with the story.
romeosami7 chapter 1 . 8/8/2017
you big freak of nature, Naruto meets Itachi and Kisame and first conversation involves getting aid in coup?
OokamiUzumaki chapter 13 . 5/9/2017
Only thing i gotta say is im feelin this story. You have to continue it its just to good to drop. No preasure tho
Dimension Lost chapter 1 . 4/25/2017
nice.
Suave Jiraiya chapter 13 . 3/23/2017
I have to admit, I had given up hope a long time ago that this story would ever be updated again. And just figured it was a casualty of a another really good and well written story left abandoned by its author. I'm glad I was mistaken, as this was always one of my favorite stories to see an update for in the past. This chapter was incredible, as it caught me completely by surprise with the whole Temari/Ino death swerve you did. Naruto confession to Ino I also thought was done well. Ans the upcoming fight between Naruto and Gaara verses the Kages should be kickass to read. Thanks again for the update and please hurry with the next one if you can.
Guest chapter 13 . 3/22/2017
Good story. I'm glad it wasn't Ino who died.
RedRose chapter 13 . 3/19/2017
Great story, I can't wait for the next chapter. I would like to see Hinata hook-up with Naruto on it. She's one of my favorite characters in the Naruto universe.
romeosami7 chapter 1 . 3/18/2017
what the fuck... he just assaulted Hokage...
Guest chapter 13 . 3/17/2017
I just finished this story and it's awesome. Please don't make us wait so long in between updates in the future.
Kingkakashi chapter 13 . 3/17/2017
Man, I'm so glad to see that this story lives on and that your continuing to write. And what a twist you did in this story. I did not see that coming at all that it was Temari who died and not Ino. It's kind of sad for me as I liked Temari and had it been me, I think I might of killed off Anko instead. Just for the symmetry of Orochimaru's second apprentice killing off his first. But it's your story and I won't fault you for your direction or decision. It still made a major impact to the overall story-line.

Overall, the chapter was excellent as I've always come to expect from you. I actually laughed at Sakura's confession to what she thought was an unconscious Naruto. I felt no sympathy for her whatsoever as I read it and still hope you'll consider some of my suggestions in my past reviews to punish and humiliate her in the story.

I thought you did a fantastic job in writing Naruto's confession of love to Ino. I do still hope that you'll find a way to bring Hinata into the little mini-harem Naruto seems to be gaining. There's definitely an opening now with Temari's passing. As for the ending of the chapter, there's not a better cliffhanger to use than the promise of what should be a really kick-ass battle scene in the future. Keep up the incredible work and I eagerly look forward to reading the next chapter of this amazing story.

PS: With seeing an update to this, that we'll also get to see updates to your other quality stories like "A Hero Returns" and "Oh Great A Sword" on the future as well.
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