I would love to see a sequel, but I assume that, 12 years later, it would probably not happen...

Hmm.. definitely an interesting read but im not sure how i feel about it. I surely dont like the inclusion of rape and main character death. The relationships were weird and many concepts were hard to understand. Well, ultimately, it was a good enough fic:)

An interesting read. Sorry that part 2 was cancelled. Read the description, though. glad you didn't actually kill of Sirius. Curious of how Fleur struck Harry down and about the Simulacrum.

Well... I have no words honestly besides that you NEED to put a warning so that everyone knows that there is RAPE in this story. Damn, especially if it is the love interest of the mc. Because she is most likely the reason everyone - or most - are reading this story in the first place.

Honestly, there is no excuse not to warn your readers. I am heavy against such stuff and the most I can I accept is an attempted r*, but not a successful one.
Not that I am easy to trigger, but its just not my cup of tea. And I hate it when I start a story where there are no warnings for NTR or Rape or anything else that falls in this category. It just sickens me to no end and ruins my mood absolutely.

I need that sequel!

I really did not want to review, but what is all of this sh*t. I thought you would make Dumbledore slightly better given he would train Harry at an earlier age. However, you somehow made him even worse. He readily admits to his knowledge of all this crap, yet he literally will not listen to anybody else's opinions and believes himself above everyone. And everyone readily bows to his wishes.

lol the story had potential but turned out to be just another load of shit on this site. Very disappointed as I know you could have written better work. Though I will admit that my opinion on rape heavily influenced this review. It’s never fun reading. Won’t be finishing that’s for sure.

I particularly hate these types of fics because they are overly dramatic! It is betrayal after betrayal after betrayal and a whole lot of angst.

it has you many set ups with little (to none) payback.. disappointing

Fanfiction needs a feature that clumps the stories in a series together and shows if the series as a whole is conplete. It is the most annoying thing to read a story and find their is a sequal needed and none written. Nothing against you personally, it can be hard sometimes to keep writing but still, such a thing would be great.

This is in desperate need of a sequel

Great story would love to see the sequel to this. Lots of good plot lines to make a interesting story. Thanks for the share

My good lord, that was hard to read. Fucking excellent, but hard to read none the less. I enjoy how the expectation of all the gushy ‘we’re in love’ soulmate kinda stuff is basically weaponized to fuck with the reader. It subverts expectations and does a good job of keeping you on the edge of your seat wanting, almost needing more, and then to give us just a tease of all the romantic stuff starting to go a little more right at the very end but never actually giving us anything is fuckin masterful. Great story, I’d say I’d be willing to read it again but I’m not sure my nerves could handle that.

One of the worst and painful story I've read in fanfiction. Please take my advice and don't read this story. That's all I can say about this.

Wow. This story just keeps getting worse and worse.