So, first off, this has taken me FOREVER to review. Today was my only real day off of work (had to go in to get my check and ended up staying and talking to my boss and Matt and everyone who was on for like half an hour lol) and of course I've felt wicked sick.

But anywhos. Adam irks me. I don't know if it's just that you're portraying him as super sketchy to the point of not letting Randy know if he finds anything out. Or if it's him in general that bugs me.

I'm all for a concerned and sexy Cena, but he just met the girl - he needs to give Lakin some space, even if she lies about where she's going.

It's understandable for Jeff (I love that she calls him Jeffery) to be overly protective of her - especially around some of the douche bags he works with - but he kind of has to let her figure herself out. The situation she's stuck in will be tough for him to keep secret from his coworkers, but it is so tough for her as well. He just needs to continue being supportive and kind of let her do her own thing.

Sorry that this is the first time I've reviewed this story. I had read the first four chapters and never reviewed. :( I love the direction you're writing in with this story. It's so different than everything else you're working on.

I hope to finish the first chapter of Inherited tomorrow afternoon after I get out of work. Toss me an IM on AIM next time you sign on so I can toss a few Inherited ideas to you and see what you think.

-AJ

i am so glad to hear from this story again! i really like the concept of this story and think it has tremendous potential! keep up the good work and i especially liked the end where jeff knew all along what was going on :) hope to hear from you soon!

xomagsox

wow girl. you're on a roll. haha, i heart jeff and john.

i caught a glimpse of raw tonight for the first time in FOREVER. i do NOT think i like the tat sleeves on your man. he was so much hotter with the first ones...

wah I want an Update! PLEASE!~! lmao and why is Orton so evil? hahaha make him nice ;) then Lakey can have more friends ;)

yay! im glad that u updated! soo...i think i was the last one 2 figure out who the mystery man was, im a lil slow :) ok so that's interesting that john knows her secret now, wonder if he really was asleep in the back, b/c jeff was supposed 2 b in the shower...m...im trying not 2 b last on this one..lol. great 2 hear from u! keep them coming honey bunn!

xomagsox

p. new penname rocks! it sounds like the name of a meeting i should be going to j/k!

I'm fucking addicted to Orton too! It is about time you updated this! Go Lakin! She gave Orton what he deserves for the moment, but at elalst she found out a name. Adam...happiness in the form of a blonde canadian...anyway. She was very defensive with John, but he seems to know everything...does he really? Update!

Sorry I forgot to review for the last chapter. Hmm, I wonder whats gonna happen now with John knowing too and how he's gonna feel.

And of course I love your penname. 15 days, add or minus some, I can't believe Baby Orton's almost here tho! Update whenever you get the chance.

Yeah right. I get the strong feeling Jeff is still in said shower. Lakin should know better then to tell him. But maybe my Johnny (haha!) can beat up your Randykins now for being a douche just then. LOVE IT.

Well I'm glad she decided to go on the road with him. It will do her some good to get away fro a while...and find her dream man...Although I think mine is already made his appearance...Oh Mr. Cena (what a gorgeous man he is) Good update!

I would love to be 'trapped' in a locker room with John. There is great possibility there.

Haha, I love this fic. I really do. It's quickly becoming one of my favorites actually. Poor Lakin...Randy needs to watch himself ;)

great story

aw...how sad! what a bunch of jerks to do that to her dog, but hopefully that will be the motivation she needs to go on the road! i guess i'm the only tard that doesn't know who the "mystery man" is...but i have an idea... :) c-ya after your hiatus!

xomagsox

I'm pretty sure I know who it is but I don't like being wrong so I'll keep it to myself. Haha. This chapter got me a little teary eyed considering I have a dog and I would be lost without her. Anyways, great job. Update soon.

P.S. I've read A legend that can't be killed and cried and didn't have the strenght to review. I will in a few days. I read every single one of your stories, and I feel weird not reviewing, but I'll get on it I promise.

Oh I'm pretty sure I know who the man in her dreams is...I can't say he wouldn't be welcomed in mine...anyway...good update. That poor dog. Nothing or one deserves that kind of treatment. Let me at those damn kids...I can take them! Good update...good luck on your reports!

I got goosebumps from the end of this. That was intense. And amazingly written!