You... you... *runs of sobbing*
It's crazy, I soo much want those two to live and be happy together... I don't recall ever thinking like that about a real couple!
Well done!

Wow this is so close it's shocking.
Brilliantly written by the way. Good work!

in was so beautiful, it really made me cry...

*sobbing* I hate you. How can you have them ALMOST kiss, and then have him turn to dust? And given that he actually DOES turn to dust in the manga...*sobs harder*

And dang it, I completely forgot she had trouble rejecting his reiatsu. Now that's gonna be one of those 'reasons-he's-not-coming-back' things that I hate so much.

Anyway, good job. Just write something happy next time, okay? *goes off and sobs in a corner*

NOOOOOOOOOOO! ignore him orihime, and just heal that bastard who is named ulquiorra and whom you love with all your heart!

:_:

this was really really sad! i hate it when one party does something and thinks it will benefit the other but is actually causing more hurt and sadness :(

sad

ZOMG, that was INCREDIBLE!1! :O wow! the ending was so tragically SWEET...great job!

Haa, so, it was a pretty angsty fanfic ya got there, but one thing ruined it for me...

I believe you said Orihime walked by a decapitated arm?

Decapitation is when your head is chopped off. XD

So, I'm sorry if it sounds offensive, but it made me laugh.

I love this last line. It breaks my heart everytime. Whenever the opportunity to rec Ulquihime fics comes up, I rec this. Yeah, beautiful, heartwrenching writing.

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This was even more sadder then manga...

*goes off to cry*

beautifully sad.

Aw... *wibbles* Man... I still hate that he is gone. Beautiful one shot!

Wow- this story seems so much like canon :)

This really is such a beautiful story.

I admit it. I cried.

The ending where she can't even kiss him really brought out the waterworks though. *sigh* Really good writing.