you should do a definite sequel

being an author myself I see great construction of the plot. BUT. some bits are hard to follow because you jump from one scene to the next way too fast, I know that when you have a great idea for the next "bit" it's easy to jump straight to it but it's best to slow down a bit

Nooooo. I'm sorry but I have a bit of complaining to do. Dumbledore is acting anything like Dumbledore! can you imagine Dumbledore saying, "hit it guys!" I'm so sorry but this needs some adjusting.

I want to see more of severus snape and It needs to be good

these chapters are an example of pure genius, they may not be completely original but I love the storyline and it is absolutely amazing.

Hello! Just wanted to let you know that you spelt Horcrux wrong in the seventh paragraph :) Also, I like how things are progressing right now!

On chapter 9, The talk, both of those songs are two favorites of mine. Stealing Cinderella and Cleaning this Gun. I love both, for different reasons, and I love how you used them to send a message.

O.M.G fabulous writing! #bestauthorintheworld

Very good story! Do you mind, if I translate this story into German?

Mwahahahaha! I love your writing!

,, so far

Actually, Fred and George are two years older tham harry, hermione and Ron

its a little too much ... don't ya think so?

Why are you having them sing songs that were not around in 1977/78?

So what are her animagus forms?