Reviews for A Kid for a Wife? |
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![]() ![]() I think " kaname" would be a great girl name for a maid |
![]() ![]() ![]() One word. Plagiarized. |
![]() ![]() ![]() please hurry and update a new chapter! this is so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi i think this is a great fanfic its funny ramance and grama all put together thanks for putting such a great fanfic for everyone to read |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like how the story progresses, i sort of, even felt how mikan felt..the angst, the hurt and the glint in her eyes for revenge..and poor natsume (tsk, tsk..) for the name that you were asking though, would "suzuki" be fine..hehe, do update really soon! i like the story very much! WRITE ON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi! i dont wanna be mean to u i just wanna ask.. dont u have ur own name? why use others then? and why dont u use ur 'imagination' to actually write ur own fanfic story.. that way u wont need to steal from others. i really think you're unfair, how do u think the real heart yngrid would feel. Its not that im angry at u or anything but i really love that author and her books, its kinda dissapointing to see someone impersonate her and re-write her novels with wrong grammars. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi! i dont wanna be mean to u i just wanna ask.. dont u have ur own name? why use others then? and why dont u use ur 'imagination' to actually write ur own fanfic story.. that way u wont need to steal from others. i really think you're unfair, how do u think the real heart yngrid would feel. Its not that im angry at u or anything but i really love that author and her books, its kinda dissapointing to see someone impersonate her and re-write her novels with wrong grammars. |
![]() ![]() ![]() tanako |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why don't you use names from the original gakuen alice like luna or hotaru or ruka? It would keep ppl less confused. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this one! please continue i cant give any critism cos i love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, Leejat. I'm also a big fan of Heart Yngrid. Actually, I know her personally. She's a very good writer and she has a good command of English. It's really unfair that someone is using her penname as well as her published stories, "A Kid For A Wife." I have read the original version of this story and I'm telling you, guys, it is much much better than this translated one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im just wondering if Hart Yngrid is somewhat related to my fave Heart Yngrid of PHR. If so, thanks a lot for posting this story! I truly love your A KID FOR A WIFE and your Fanfiction version of it is quite impressive as well... |
![]() ![]() ![]() continue, please. But i am sorry.. i can't give the name you want |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha 2 strong personalities you got there...quite nice..well who will win this deal? just be aware of your tenses...uupdate soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah! Found your fic today and it sure is interesting! Love it! As for a name... old maid... Sasami, Haru, Hana, Risa, etc. Dunno. Just random names. |