| Reviews for Second |
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   fanakatsuki chapter 1 . 7/4/2016 Poor goten |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2015 O-O... NUUUUUUUUUUU! Oml nooooo! A;hhhhhhhhhhhh:'( |
| PleaseDeleteMuAccount chapter 1 . 2/7/2009 I like of the subject you worked, I really think that Goten is one caracther with endless probabilits in angst. especially with his non existent bon with his father. I really loved. Make more about him... kissus, Ja ne K.M |
| LauraNeatO chapter 1 . 4/24/2005 Holy crap... although this was short, it was very powerful. And it was very good. But wow... it's intense! |
| Pastaaaaaaa chapter 1 . 10/8/2002 ...You write so well... I love how you explian everything, I tried my hand at angst... I didn't think it came out to well... |
| Gotenluva chapter 1 . 8/11/2002 Very good, I love the extended metaphor throughout the entire story about Goten being second best, it really sets the mood. Thanks you for reviewing my work, and I hope to read more of yours in the future. _ |
| E-chan chapter 1 . 7/30/2002 ;_; sad...poor goten! he's a sweetie, I'd put him first! |
| Professor Authordude chapter 1 . 3/21/2002 *sobs* Poor poor Goten. Excellent story. |
| lady dragon chapter 1 . 9/27/2001 damn? were u depressed when u wrote it? its so depressing |
| Artemicion chapter 1 . 9/27/2001 I love this story! It's so sad. Poor Goten! WAHHHHH! |
