They'd have made an interesting pair

That was so good, especially with Kiriyama's passionless actions, and Mitsuko's thoughts. x)

I think I must have read this like fifteen times, but holy shit, that was AMAZING! It was so wonderfully worded and you wrote both Mistuko and Kazuo in character. This story makes me really happy. Thank you for that fantastic read.

Dude
This was intense
I mean, really, really intense
In a way that's... optional
Like
You could read this as a bit of smut
But you worked with Mitsuko's past, and Kazuo's utter emotionlessness, to create a story that's really quite... sombre. Poignant. I don't know if that was deliberate or not, but very, very well done.

this was soooo hot.
Great smut fic!

This is really good. And accurate. :'] I totally ship Kiriyama/Souma :3333

that was so awesome, and very well written. Good job. 3

Disturbingly accurate characterization. Loved it.