Wow, pretty intense! What is Cloud's feeling for her though? He was seem to be trying to kiss her in the first chapter, but then walks away.
Anyway,I like the chaos twist you added, and hope you'll add the last chapter soon!

Hope you get around to posting the lats chapter :D

when will it be up?

no u cant stop keep going i love your story

Update! :)

This is a beautiful story! I love your writing! If you can will you please read & review my storys too?

Please update!

GAHH! I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! -starts foaming at the mouth-

I really like the plot you've created here, I'd think it would be hard or challenging to create a character like Chaos in this story, but you're handling it perfectly. Or at least I think you are! I really look forward to the next chapter!

I like your fic, will Tifa go looking for Vincent anyway? I want them together hehe, write more soon

O_O Update, please! This is too good!

O_O update!

jealousy perhaps? update!

aww. short, sweet and to the point. is there going to be more? please say yes! like why his demon side took over, or had a passion for poor Tifa. (or why his human side does NOT lol)

Wow. Very nice format, I really like your style. I hope that you might continue this story.

Now THIS was good. :D I don't know what's so appealing about men who have such flamboyant inner demons, but... it's always fascinated me, and you handled the situation marvelously here. :) Such a situation deserves a little bit more description, though, in my opinion; I know it's not consensual, but still, you make things sound a bit dry. But I still adore the idea.

Keep writing!