Reviews for Devil of the Hidden Leaf
KyleMMPR96 chapter 24 . 6/12
I hope you continue this...this has been a great read and would love for more
robert krause chapter 4 . 5/25
when the grils had each get them bags pack in now when the big one had her tame pic into her bag now as well is one of her mom too and Naruto own mother and some others one on the ninjas team as well , and when Naruto had then get them to his clan home now , when the 2 grils had get them new bed rooms the suits bed rooms now were Naruto move out his stuff now and tame pic now and his 4 jackets red blue and black one , when others he had get is black and white one and white 2 when put them away now , he had put the tame pic on the bed room desk , when looking over the big size cloned he find a hidden office for his mother had owner ship of , when looking into it now a office of her is pics no the wall and one big one the bank of his clan had ownership before came here , when looking it over he find a hidden book green and black and full of her times living , when read it now and saw one was on the bank when she had made some way made a new shop looking now a 4floor shop and offices in the back now, when think of it was cool too, when meeting the grils now little sister had move into his old bed room , and her sister had why was summer room , sir i Robert Krause was doing it when Naruto get back home and was find a book no why his mom was doing running the shop ,and when moving to a new bed room is mix feeling too, if you think this spam it is not but my own think of why Naruto be doing when came home and meeting his lover and little sister , i do not like or love spam fan fiction for Naruto , 2 why not let sarkura in with him it may be best for her and 3 she get out of her clan too , i Robert Krause am fan of sakura as with Naruto ,
robert krause chapter 2 . 5/22
sir i Robert Krause who is fan of Sakura was think why not put her into marring Naruto and she is his 3 officer and his wife too , when he had a war vs her clan and his win it too , when he marring her ten-ten and some others too, when he made her help out too , her job is doing the others homes on the clan lands and pool too, and helping it the shop too 1 floor ninjas colthers and when ten-ten is no the 2 floor and he and her dad doing the top floor like books and side stuff , when the last floor is offices and cub size and meeting room, gym and others stuff too, as for his own working he had to doing it school he was from and for when he be to the red lights doing poker and wining it all money form it help out too like buy out ninjas stuff like swords and others ninjas stuff too, some of he sell in the shop and made the out side of the vaillge his own now body huther took out s class bad guys and woman out , and money form it helping too , like buy out some sub houses out like a hut like house he get to put in the men cave office/bed room ,and his helping out ten-ten 3 brothers out Dan JR who like to living in the woods for he not for clans houses ,when workings in the shop now and his dad as , when the others like Robert is more of Naruto 2 in the gov like his brother not to living in the woods but the red lights is more for him ,a old inn he get form the days be a ninja with his live size dolls grils and woman too , others think his odd and he say fuck off , when the last is hacker berry and his too living in the red lights too and inn he too living in he had workings it the shop too , when Naruto had read in his dad book the 3 boys can be trues for it too , when the 3 one is on the road get stuff form the others ninjas vaillge s and get them back to the shop now, and his the buying men , for it too, as the odd balls brothers , others call them , too,
robert krause chapter 13 . 5/17
when before came to the battles Naruto had be talk to ten-ten mom and dad for when over some think of the shop and when it need more of shops into it now , Naruto had get his dad 1 think of doing gray men co and when doing it Naruto buy out some old shops on the outside of the vaillge some old shops he get ownership of ,he had put in his own office and men cave too when in the 1 shop is it and when the 2 is for keeping money and gold and others stuff Naruto keep Hidden away form his tame 1 job and when he get lock away now , Naruto had used the money form it to buy out foes and shops out too , when the meeting room is on the top floor of his 1 shop he meeting ape old owners kids rick and Robert and then the sisters , when the trying to get it over with the tame doing it sale out the shop , when then clan of ape was now going out now , when Naruto and ten-ten be over the shop now only saw some juke stuff and offices need to be out now , when Naruto and ten-ten had used hammers on the offices and old shop old bed room house too, when get to working out now others he get to buy now , when keeping old sings form them Naruto had them on the wall of the meeting room now, and when he siting in his office it the shop Naruto put back his mom old pic on the wall now and some old stuff too form old owners too , when in time he and the ten-ten brothers had get to go on the road for when to others vaillge s slan off ninjas stuffs and swords and others stuff too, when in time he and his clan get home now ,
robert krause chapter 24 . 5/12
when Naruto had move to looking for his class room and when working on it now and when siting in his ware house men cave cub size office over some school workings and tames to be made and when doing it now , some get the same ways of 3, 2 boys and one gril and when doing it now , sand them off to others it the same school and when it was fin over with , Naruto had get back to the were house and was up on the top floor now sleeping in bed now had eat his food and cooficn and when reading his stuff no the shop now and find need for more shops he get to the gray men co his dad old one and used the mob money to buy out Ione ape out form the clan Eddy , when the 3 brothers be made moves with hot grils and woman into it now , and the sisters is into art , Naruto had them each $400-9090,000 money for it and 12 gold bars each , the clan took it now , when Ione ape old longer is now in the meeting room now , when the shop is now for sub stuff Naruto need to used now , and running is Naruto now , old books of all kinds be selling here now , and ninjas nets and others things too, scrolls too , when Naruto keep a cub size desk in the new shop now , as for others Naruto and ten-ten be buy out it is the same too old co clans shops sings end on the wall now , then when the money form the shop had help out too, sir this not spam you but my own out took on cos buy out foes like , and sings of foes on the wall is a way of seeing who you buy out too, looking up on h, s cars made the USA when the big 3 had buy out others in the same car cos like GM ford and c, , Robert Krause
robert krause chapter 20 . 5/11
when Naruto used his twin guns it some twin grils and then when looking it them now money a map to the ship and some odd notes too , when Naruto had ask if the grils body is now in the boomers now and when put fire to then ship and find 2 new twins guns one was gold and red and others be blue and red form LIZ and form her sister is black red and green and when her 2 is gold life and brown and hot big bods woman on it now , when then now is his , when keeping then in a case now , when the swords and sank axe was now his now , when reading new scrolls now get to cats warriors and others kinds too, now his powers get big super now , muslces no his get big now , and the money now his own now , when sane back home now and used it to buy out others shops now , ape night warriors clan shop out now , he had ten-ten and her brothers going over the shop for new officers and some gym too, when ware house #43b is now Naruto men cave office /2 bed room /class room office now, when used his clones a rat and fox and bat now get stuff back to it now , it is cool now,
robert krause chapter 19 . 5/11
when Naruto had doing when he marring Temari and the 2 had made the whirlpool back up with Naruto long lost family coinc is lord of it tommy Leroy is it , when keag is Sara Jackson a black hire woman , when Naruto is now tommy right hand men/yage yin fox , spy who going be in the light drack and gray , body huther , when living in the base house up floor bed room , Naruto sleeping in for when , then it the lord house in his own office , then when find out about it , the men had buy a house for Naruto to living , why tommy , it is for you workings here for me Naruto the others on staff is going mad about you sleeping in you office a men i think i saw my old cap Roberta Leroy ford doing it before when she running the ship zap zig a battle ship , when in days she was having coffice and tea in days and it night she was down some sleeping stuff , i was Lt 2 class , when unlike her i be sleeping only 2 and doing my job is more good lord , yes Naruto , buy sleep in you office , it is odd too, when looking it the hut like house tree house now , Naruto had his bags down on the floor now , sleeping on the floor now, were his lord think Naruto my little working ant , when going home now , he be over when Naruto living in one was a inn the red lights inn a 2 floor house inn but it be bund down only time it was , as for the 2 is a lack side house when Naruto and co used to going over ninjas and others who trying to do bad stuff , a up floor room a bed room be into it now , and then his own office it the lord house offices , when now Naruto can living in the tree house now,
robert kruase chapter 18 . 5/11
when Naruto get the new looking for the shop before doing it Naruto move out the old office his mom had and some pics too like her old men Danny and him it age 1 and his dad before he was kill off , when the shop get open up , others be some old maps of others shops and a desk Naruto keep , when it was fin get over with Naruto ten-ten and her mom and dad be meeting in the new meeting room and when on the wall Naruto keep the old shop name her pic and some bits of others stuff Naruto find , like his mom old abut black ops mask a blue and red one a fox sage mask , when get on the new officers only 5 big size ones be in one Naruto get and ten-ten and then her mom and dad get them own officers and when the others is cub size city Naruto had be put in when ten-ten brothers had each had a desk and Hinata and her little sister each get one , when it was open up Naruto running the meeting with why is going on and going over some stuff need to running the shop now , as ten-ten dad and mom was running it now and both the boys , Sammy [Bart] and JR and the little Joe when the 2 is Naruto 2 in the gov job, as for homes the boys Sammy and joe when living in red lights in some town house unit 1 and 2 ,JR had living in the woods lands in a hut house he had ,for his out doors men and huther is his thing , when the 4 be ex ninjas now, when little joe had his 4 living size dolls grils ,it time he was it a 2 hand shop he saw sarkura Naruto ex tame met came in with her clothers she had get out with , a red dreed and some others too, he buy for it , when others think Sammy was odd one , when get home he had them on his living size doll gril , now , a black one , when her pic in his necks on him now, when helping with the shop be part time for him when Naruto had to put him in as his 2 , now when Naruto siting in his office reading old fils on his 4 brothers in laws , his 2 one came up be in the racks 2 had Naruto be , only thing Naruto like is his rack of warring officer of his ninjas tame ford nights , was hi good when it came for ninjas stuff and black ops jobs , before quit it when his dad get took out , so now ,Naruto meeting him now, and the others Naruto saw is more of workings with canning van and ten-ten and him be workings on war wongs and rum bulls to moving about others lands to get stuff sale and get too, Naruto saw her big brother JR is for the job as cap-boss job and Sammy had working with as team mat and both had each backs , so it is too , when get to go no the road now both boys had money save up now, Naruto and road boss cap meeting in the men office over why is to be used for , you and you brother is to living with the wonge when on the road no beer or go to a back room or even a bolther yes sir , you 2 are took the name of Devil may cry with you ,
robert krause chapter 13 . 5/11
when took out his old rival and tame mat out and when then Naruto had to get over it now, when in the bed room with ten-ten the 2 meeting now and when she was fixing his 2 guns and she was over it now and seeing him now muslces so big now and her own now the had sex with each others and when he had her on the bed now and on top of her and kissing her now and saying my you sexing little gril are and not a fan gril and when then be think of get the shop open up gril and when then Naruto and ten-ten feeling like old times and when she was sleeping now with him old times mind stuff came in now seeing her now and the same gril who was there only she big now , a ninjas warrior not some fan gril like his tame met he kwon of , it is good now, when put back on his vest red and black now , sir this not spam you sir but my own think of when 2 lost lovers meeting back to each other , and a way of tame mats had seeing each working in as ninjas , Robert Krause
robert krause chapter 15 . 5/10
when before going with his god father Naruto put the racks of his clan up now with the grils is now right hand and 2 was made into it now and when others had jobs to doing with ,Naruto meeting the old men and he get the job with Naruto and ten-ten Naruto right hand woman , over the shop and when doing it now ,Naruto buy out were house ops nights when he put his mom old office and some others stuff into , he had sit with him on the top floor and show him the pic of the old bank offices and 1 floor and ask to made it 3 floors and the old shop Ion ape into a big super size offices and cub size offices and gyms now , when doing it Naruto took out money form the mob run co money he took and he Hidden awry form the rich men and woman in power , when the money sit in a suit case now , when get to workings now he let ten-ten be over it now , when her mom and dad was helping too, sir this not spam you but it showing why Naruto and ten-ten be doing on the shop his mom had owner of , and used the bank pic is good too, well family co had to working to made it big is good to seeing it now,
robert krause chapter 4 . 5/9
when Naruto had to be working on the shop new looking and when in was former the bank when Naruto dad clan had owners of before came to the vaillge and when reading his mom own black book and find out it was gave to her by him when she was 19 years old and she get the shop for her by a old Ray Leroy u, who had be 98 years old and his pic is no the wall of the Hidden cub size office and when looking it Naruto think his seeing ghost of his tame met long lost founder of the clan own little brother , when seeing it now he was in the old men old bed room , he had his bed room down to the earth and no rich stuff or pics but in the back room is not the same but a office in it now and seeing pics on the wall . when he was sill living the men own green book help out too and saying he dearth was stage by him and his big brother and other one Naruto u, when he was Hidden in rice lands workings as famer and warrior and then when it to blood and wars and battles was sill going no he and his wife move about but she get kill by some sick nut men who get kill off by him ,when the money form it help him out made a new clan and move it to the vaillge when the 1 nd 2 be living , when then i find Naruto who was 2 be in my room i sill say when the time is right this book my boy well help out one day , and he dead it 90 , when now its time now old men ,
robert krause chapter 4 . 5/3
when the bi sister had get her team pic and others stuff like ninjas stuff and her own little ninjas doll boy Robert lee , a doll boy form the USA one her uncle get her , when get home Naruto had gave up his old bed room and get his stuff out now , paly cards grils with muslces and big super size bobs and when he find it bar night ninjas , when his books too, and tame pic too , when in the new one he put it on the same head back by his dad old tame with his god father old tame and his dad own tame , now as is with his mom own gril tame and her own ninjas tame , when then Naruto had get to sleeping now, when the little bar he had some beer and ice too , when get sleeping now, when the art too he move before get the bed room now , when some are on the wall now , even his cub size desk had one pic of some play boy bunny gril of 1953 black one unkown who it is , Naruto find her in the same bar with playing cards now she on the wall now, when in the back room now find a hidden door and into it is a office cub size too, it was his mom own office like the shop had a super size one this is little and only thing is art of some bank his dad clan owners of , when she get for her bith day and seeing it now a 3 floor shop is why she is love to get , why not , he had read hi dad own green book on why his own thinks of get to do gray guy co to doing some stuff like owner ship of others shops and doing some more lands like men cave and some others things too, so why not,
robert krause chapter 3 . 5/3
sir i Robert had to ask when he move out of his old cub size house why not let Naruto own some set of books no ninjas stuff ,and scrolls too, as for art too it was some grils with big size bobs on them he find one day it age 8 years old , he keep them 13 of them now on the wall of his bed room , in the back is a map of his clan lands and house he used to live in , as when move out he took them with him and some paly cards of hot grils he had too , when find them when he was 5 it time of a bar be lock up and Naruto had find a back door and pick the lock and get into it and find food to eat , and when walking about the bar Naruto had find some art on the wall and paly cars he took with him , saying it luck thing he put them in his shit now, sir as with it Naruto i was think of Naruto buy out the old bar and keeping as a men cave and made it into his own now, like NICS new o, had on , the king N,
robert krause chapter 14 . 4/12
when Naruto and tenten was working on the shop floors and when find the back room is why his dad keep it lock for others trying to get into it before so Naruto be siting into his mom old office and read on the old map on the all shops and think of buy out the others gave devil may cry a super size shop now but save the under part have it own rooms when the stuff is made and when ten-ten and Naruto keep workings tables and sits it now , even ten-ten mom had a room now , as for the last one floor Naruto keep the big 4 officers it meeting room ,some cub size officers it now, when her brothers sit it and others too,
robert krause chapter 9 . 4/3
when Naruto and ten-ten had get the money form the mob money and gold and some of it was used for long time stuff like buy out foes out in d block 12 to 4 others shops out lone wolf and big ape both shops try to get into his mom shop before and lost out and when Naruto buy out the others he find a under part when old hidden rooms be made and Naruto keep them and was use it now for working shops and made new stuff too, when other shop Naruto and others get was Ione Roberts a shop for 2 to 3 times had ware houses in the back now used to keep bull ox s and battle waongs Naruto had get to used for stuff to took and sold off , when others parts Naruto and ten-ten find a offices them need to running now , 6 offices and a super size cubs offices now , when it was now good too , Naruto had sit in his new office and reading his dad old book on stuff he was working with , and Naruto find his old men was trying to get the gray men co off and running but no luck now it is up to Naruto to running it now , when looking it a map of the vaillge past he find old shops be took out and buy out the 4 now and was keeping one shop with hidden mob money 45 big boxes of money need to running the co with ,
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