'It's Harry, not Harold.' This, right here, is enough to make me love this story.

I love the descriptions of Harry's dances!

Wow.
I already knew that you are a good author from your SEAL!Tony (NCIS) Stories, but it wasn't until I was finished with this and wanted to check out the others stories from the author that I realized you wrote this too.
great story! Really really loved reading this and am sad to see that it is finished and there isn't more.
thank you for writing this and sharing it with us readers.
I especially loved the Harry when he was at the club and dancing.. Somehow that bit and when he was all confident Badass fascinated me especially.

Lovely ending. I've always hated the ron/hermione pairing as he seemed to immature for her but your version of Ron seems far better suited. I'm glad dudley is getting to visit the magic world and love that Harry has a great family. Only thing I'm not keen on it Hermione having a child so soon, just don't picture her to have children before her career (or at all really!)

Now I don't usually do this but your use of British language is pretty good everywhere else and this particular one bugs me. All bangers are sausages but not all sausages are bangers. You don't have bangers at breakfast in fact the only context I've ever heard it in is with mash. You have bangers and mash but you have sausage and chips.

I don't normally review such old stories but since I saw you've posted some NCIS stuff a few months ago I thought it was worth a go. I absolutely love this story. I'm usually a very much Snape centred story reader but this story is amazing. Well thought out, well placed and has a great plot. The level of detail with regards to bdsm clubs, martial arts and sword fighting is great. (Admittedly I know nothing about the second two but I onky wish the bdsm clubs I've been to would be as you've described!) really great story. Thank you for all your effort. I'm sure I'll be back to read some of your other HP and NCIS stories. I am a little (like 3 seasons behind on NCIS though so hope there's not too many spoilers

If magic was real I would be so skinny. I would transfigure spinach into chocolate and it would have the nutrients of spinach

I just wanted you to know how much I enjoyed this story. During this time of the Conav 19 virus and social distancing have a really good read helped a LOT! thank you

Omg I hate this chapter. Did Malfoy really try to spank a teenager. This was super cringe.

I know this series is done and over with. That this was also written some time ago but my goodness why is Harry written out like he is 12. I know he was abused but he is nearly an adult in this and yet he plays out like a little kid. I get calling Malfoy Papa. That was actually kind of cute. But by chapter 15 one would expect him to have grown up a little and to act his age. Same with Draco. They are making mistakes 6 year old probably wouldn't do. And are responding in the same fashion. This is hella fluffy.

Whoa, that was a lot to digest. This is go to ng to be a goody.

I've read this story a few times now and I love it. I was just wondering why 893 made it to archive of our own but this one didn't?

This was such a pleasure to read! Loved every moment of it

DEATH NIBBLER. I. CANT. FUDBDJDN

Ngl I was picturing the flying scene to the “immigrant song” the whole time