Reviews for Flawed Mortality |
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Yuzuki476 chapter 1 . 3/22/2013 awsome story :) |
isinkintohearts chapter 1 . 1/3/2010 I feel bad for Haruka.. Im sure Juuri loves him passionately. : So cute. Love. It. :D |
Syeira chapter 1 . 11/25/2008 I really like this story. I like how your one-shots reveal snippets of the relationship that is to be, and how frustrating and confusing it is. I hope you do more. |
MnlLolita chapter 1 . 11/21/2008 I love it! - |
Raina Meldamiriel chapter 1 . 10/4/2008 wow you are so clever to write something as deep as this it's fantastic and just wow lol i cant wait for more i hope to read more haruka and juuri storys from you soon |
amukay chapter 1 . 9/29/2008 Wahh that was really sad Don't get me wrong - i realy enjoyed it But Poor Hakura :'( Juuri loves him really im sure! |
Lieutenant H.W chapter 1 . 8/9/2008 Really good. Love the characterizations and while Haruka does seem a little pervy, the reason for it definately makes sense. I adore Juuri, you made her seem so sweet and innocent and huggable almost. I'll definately be seeing what other stories you have, because this was nicely written! |
cassandra chapter 1 . 8/6/2008 Man this is good. To be honest, I like how this story more than the kingdom of white orchad. Probably it's because i favor the characterization of Juuri in this story more. It'll be really cool if you continue on with more chapters for this story. There's great potential. |
ZippoKittens chapter 1 . 7/30/2008 Teehee. Read both of those stories...they were rally good. :) Hope you make more! |
amperstamp chapter 1 . 7/25/2008 I love your stories, they're so smart and they make me feel really dumb. You can almost taste the lust between Juuri and Haruka... it's sufficateing! You need to write more... maybe not to this story but more Haruka and Juuri lust. |
Rachynn chapter 1 . 7/13/2008 O_o The world needs more HarukaxJuuri. You did a wonderful job of capturing the contradictory duality of Haruka's feelings towards Juuri. It was both sweet and saddening at the same time. *favourited* Thank you for writing such a beautiful little story. :) -Rachynn- |
arashikishu000 chapter 1 . 6/20/2008 omg, this is truely amazing! Best HarukaJuuri fanfic I have read so far. I loved how you described the bittersweet sibling/fiance relationship between Haruka and Juuri...I give this a 5 thumbs up!. ps. this is so going to my favorites. |
Peace Heaven chapter 1 . 6/11/2008 nice..I like it. |
wildchartermage chapter 1 . 5/29/2008 intense and Haruka sounds like a . but it's cool and write more plz of the pair, esp ur other story "Kingdom" |
FuyuKoneko chapter 1 . 4/28/2008 The last line of the story was hauntingly sad. ) |