Reviews for Ours
PaganHoliday chapter 21 . 3/27/2019
SOOOOOOO GOOD! Thank you for writng such a wonderful story.
KkChibiChop chapter 21 . 11/27/2013
This story was amazing! I read a few of the stories that are prequels to this one and they are already added to my favorites. This story though had the ability to make me laugh one moment and cry the next. It was so sweet and loving. I plan to read all the campanion pieces as well, especially the 25 days of Christmas one. I love Christmas stories! Any who, great job on the story!
strayMongrel chapter 21 . 7/15/2010
I can't express how much I loved this story in words. I laughed, I cried, I loved this story so much. In fact, I read almost all of your stories (still have about 3 more to go). I loved your GenRai that was thrown in there. I love that couple. Too bad there aren't many fanfics out there! Keep writing and I'll keep reading! 3
Seshat7 chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
I'm lost for words... ahh...it's mind blowing...sigh...I can't think straight.. too much se?...ahem!...too much stimulant to the point that I'm overwhelmed. Well written though and cute kid, that Minoru kun. Good story!
cilia-chan chapter 21 . 3/10/2009
WOW! so good! :-) thank you for letting us read! again: really GOOD!
tineryn chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
I wasn't going to review until I got to the end of the series, but, when they're talking about wedding vows, "...and the valves come from the heart." For some reason, this typo really made me laugh.

Off to finish :D
Gingitsune32 chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
Love your stories. Was reading chapter one and noted this error.

“Calm down Kakashi,” Gai said gently, “this isn’t something to freak out over. The present needs some thought, and the valves come from the heart. I recommend to write them down so that you won’t go blank at the ceremony.”

I think you meant vows instead of valves?
Strawberry chapter 21 . 12/17/2008
I though your story was very Imagantive and descriptive and thats what made it so good.

At time it was hilarious and I laughed my head off

You are good at writing

Thank I really enjoyed reading the whole thing.
Kaiyou chapter 21 . 12/9/2008
I love this series! I have no life so I read and re-read it on a regular basis
DarkAuroran chapter 21 . 11/25/2008
this story was just excellent. Can't believe it took me so long to read it all. I actually had, a long time ago, read up to the end of the honeymoon and though that was it. It was a great read and very heartwarming. Nice fic honey _

Dark
Pete Magno chapter 21 . 11/19/2008
i love this fic. it's really warm and sweet. like hot chocolate.

i keep smiling when i was reading it.

tq for the lovely fic.
Spazz Kitten chapter 20 . 10/19/2008
I love your writings and your version of the Hatake family! You're so good with coming up with story lines and putting scenes together well!
Whyisntthereadeleteaccount chapter 21 . 6/26/2008
SQE.E.E.E.E.E.E.E.E.E.! Love this story so cute!
Whyisntthereadeleteaccount chapter 7 . 6/26/2008
Well sir/ma'am/YAM,

this is more then TEN chapters of fluff, drama, romance/phsical/mental, mindnumbing sex. love it
Spazz Kitten chapter 21 . 6/11/2008
You should have Minoru meet a girl! It would be hilarious considering he'd probably be completely socially awkward with girl because he has two fathers. It would be adorable for them to try and explain about girls!
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